神马作文网写作不好，请老师指点，Thanks
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请老师给出一篇文章参考，Thanks
解题思路： 框架；内容；组织语言
解题过程：
你好，范文如下：
The Internet is a useful assistant leading people to another world which surprises everyone. I think the Internet has advantages and disadvantages. Here is my advice.
As you say， the Internet helps us get more information about all subjects，and friends can be made on the line. However，it is bad for you to be addicted to the created world. To start with， more time are wasted while you spend less on study. Moverover，online friends are not reliable，maybe they come here to cheat you. Furthermore，occupied with the Net ，you can be seperated from the real world，which results in many diseases physically and mentally，particularly some will hurt themselves.
愿你满意。
最终答案：略
解题过程：
你好，范文如下：
The Internet is a useful assistant leading people to another world which surprises everyone. I think the Internet has advantages and disadvantages. Here is my advice.
As you say， the Internet helps us get more information about all subjects，and friends can be made on the line. However，it is bad for you to be addicted to the created world. To start with， more time are wasted while you spend less on study. Moverover，online friends are not reliable，maybe they come here to cheat you. Furthermore，occupied with the Net ，you can be seperated from the real world，which results in many diseases physically and mentally，particularly some will hurt themselves.
愿你满意。
最终答案：略