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She is, in my mind is a very gentle person, is a kind-hearted man. Her heart is very good, very considerate, has long hair, small eyes, a thin piece of have a glib lips, face always hung faint smile, she is very reasonable, very few quarrels with others, although very stubborn, but can listen to others views. She is good at sports, but rarely in front of others to show off, she is the most perfect in my heart!
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解题过程：
你好，答疑如下
She is, in my mind is a very gentle person, is a kind-hearted man. Her heart is very good, very considerate,改She is， in my mind a very gentle person，a kind-hearted and considerate man. has long hair, small eyes, a thin piece of have a glib lips, face always hung faint smile,改 With long hair，small eyes and a glib tongue，she always has smiles on her face. she is very reasonable, very few quarrels with others, although very stubborn, but can listen to others views.改Though stubborn，she is very reasonable. In other words，thanks to taking friends' advice，she is found no quarrels with others. She is good at sports, but rarely in front of others to show off, she is the most perfect in my heart!改：She is good at sports，too. Rarely in front of others does she show off. What a perfect girl in my heart！
改文：
She is， in my mind a very gentle person，a kind-hearted and considerate girl.With long hair，small eyes and a glib tongue，she always has smiles on her face.Though stubborn，she is very reasonable. In other words，thanks to taking friends' advice，she is found no quarrels with others.She is good at sports，too. Rarely in front of others does she show off. What a perfect girl in my heart！
愿你满意，异议来信。
最终答案：略
解题过程：
你好，答疑如下
She is, in my mind is a very gentle person, is a kind-hearted man. Her heart is very good, very considerate,改She is， in my mind a very gentle person，a kind-hearted and considerate man. has long hair, small eyes, a thin piece of have a glib lips, face always hung faint smile,改 With long hair，small eyes and a glib tongue，she always has smiles on her face. she is very reasonable, very few quarrels with others, although very stubborn, but can listen to others views.改Though stubborn，she is very reasonable. In other words，thanks to taking friends' advice，she is found no quarrels with others. She is good at sports, but rarely in front of others to show off, she is the most perfect in my heart!改：She is good at sports，too. Rarely in front of others does she show off. What a perfect girl in my heart！
改文：
She is， in my mind a very gentle person，a kind-hearted and considerate girl.With long hair，small eyes and a glib tongue，she always has smiles on her face.Though stubborn，she is very reasonable. In other words，thanks to taking friends' advice，she is found no quarrels with others.She is good at sports，too. Rarely in front of others does she show off. What a perfect girl in my heart！
愿你满意，异议来信。
最终答案：略