英语演讲稿写好了但是不知道有哪些错误,

英语演讲稿写好了但是不知道有哪些错误,
My summer holiday
Hello Boys
and girls!Today I will introduce about
my travel to Zhangjiajie.
This summer,I went to Zhangjiajie and I had a
lot of fun.
we arrived in Zhangjiajie at night,and Zhangjiajie's skyis very clean,the air is fresh,lt make me feel very comfortable
First
of all I would like to introduce is the Zhangjiajie’s night market,there are a lot of food to eat,when we got
to the night market,we were very excited,there are barbecue shops,some small restaurants and other snack shops,at last,we ate squid In a store,the squid was very delicious!
This part I want to introduce the mountains of Zhangjiajie.There are a lot of
mountains in zhangjiajie,some high and some
low,multi-shaped mountains are very beautiful,People imagine them like
something in their lifes,so watching the mountains is a good fun!We climbed
the mountains for two days,we were tired,but we were very happy.
There’s some big canyons in zhangjiajie,too.
We went there,and we watched the waterfall there,that was very spectacular!
There’s a forest
park in the Zhangjiajie Scenic Area,in the
park,there are a lot of animals,we saw many monkeys there,they sat in the trees and Put on manner of styles,sometimes,they Grab some visitors food,I think they were so lovely.
At last,I
want to tell you about the driftage.we
went to there,and we had a very good play,when we were having driftage,we dressed
in rain coats and had some water-war,that was fun!When The first
waterfall we passed,we drank some water from the waterfall,and the water was
clean and a little sweet.
That was my summer travel,I t was wonderful!
Thanks for your listening!

My summer holiday
Good morning/afternoon,Boys and girls!Today I will share with you my travel to Zhangjiajie.
This summer,I went to Zhangjiajie and had a lot of fun.We arrived at Zhangjiajie at night.Zhangjiajie's sky was very clean and the air was fresh,which make me feel very comfortable
First of all,I would like to introduce you Zhangjiajie’s night market.There are a lot of food to eat.We were very excited when we got to the night market.There are barbecue shops,some small restaurants and other snack shops.We ate squid in a store.The squid was very delicious.
Secondly,I want to introduce the mountains of Zhangjiajie.There are a lot of mountains in zhangjiajie,some high and some low.Multi-shaped mountains are very beautiful.People imagine them something in their lifes,so watching the mountains is a good fun.We climbed the mountains for two days.We were tired,but very happy.
There’s some big canyons in zhangjiajie,too.We went there,and we watched the waterfall there,that was a spectacular!
There’s a forest park in the Zhangjiajie Scenic Area.In the park,there are a lot of animals.We saw many monkeys sitting in the trees and putting on manner of styles.Sometimes,they grab some visitors' food.I think they were so lovely.
At last,I want to tell you about the driftage.We went there,and had a very good time.When we were having driftage,we dressed in rain coats and had some water-war,that was fun !When we passed The first waterfall,we drank some water from the waterfall,and the water was clean and a little sweet.
That was my summer trip and was wonderful!
Thanks for listening!