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My brother`s hobbies My brother is a junior high school student. He likes musics as well as playing volleyball.So,he is famous for basketball and volleyball in his school.And he real hobby is playing basketball and it`s very good.At 篮球比赛中，最出色,as a result 赢得了好评！！！Ｈe has a lot of hobbies such as reading ,painting and swimming. 我们让写６０个词，请老师在帮忙改改！！！ 谢谢！！！这是写别人的爱好的文章！！！
解题思路： 如下
解题过程：
需要修改的地方有:
1.He likes musics as well as playing volleyball and basketball .
把musics改为music .因为music是不可数名词.
2.And he real hobby is playing basketball and it`s very good.
改为:And his real hobby is playing basketball and he's very good at it .
3.At 篮球比赛中，最出色,as a result 赢得了好评！！！
改为:He is one of the best players in the basketball match.so he is very popular with the teachers and students .
4.Ｈe has a lot of hobbies such as reading ,painting and swimming.
改为:Ｈe also has many other hobbies , such as reading ,painting and swimming.
最终答案：略
解题过程：
需要修改的地方有:
1.He likes musics as well as playing volleyball and basketball .
把musics改为music .因为music是不可数名词.
2.And he real hobby is playing basketball and it`s very good.
改为:And his real hobby is playing basketball and he's very good at it .
3.At 篮球比赛中，最出色,as a result 赢得了好评！！！
改为:He is one of the best players in the basketball match.so he is very popular with the teachers and students .
4.Ｈe has a lot of hobbies such as reading ,painting and swimming.
改为:Ｈe also has many other hobbies , such as reading ,painting and swimming.
最终答案：略