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你在北京的英国朋友Tom非常喜欢中国绘画。请你根据以下信息，给Tom写信，告诉他近期将要举办的一个画展，并建议他去参观。
时间：5月10日到25日
地点：中国美术馆
内容：张大千100多幅绘画作品
画家简介：中国20世纪国画大师，擅长多种画法，在山水画方面卓有成就。
注意：1.词数不少于50。
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
4. 参考词汇：landscape 山水画；山水画法
Dear Tom,
How's life? After knowing you are a big fan of Chinese paintings,i would like to introduce the exhibition will be held in the next days. The exhibition will be held from 10th to 25th in May.The adress of the exhibition is Chin Art Museum.At that time,there will be hundreds of paintings from Zhangdaqian to be shown. Zhangdaqian is good at drawing with skills,especially on landscape.So he is one of the most important painter inthe 20th centry of China. Here are the information of the exhibition.Please contact me if you have any doubts. Yours,
Li Hua

解题思路：基本正确但有的地方还是没有注意细节和英语表达习惯
解题过程：
1. introduce you the exhition that will be held in the near future。
2 adress-- address Chiness Art Museum
3 one of the most important painters
4. Here is the information doubts--- doubt
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