神马作文网谁来帮我批改一下我的英语作文,我的分全给了
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谁来帮我批改一下我的英语作文,我的分全给了
my family
I am in a happy family,my parents very love me ,I vr love they too.
M mother works in a factory,she is a worker,she often say :"I like my work." my mother like doing sports ,she often sports in seven AM and in five PM,She has long hair and has big eyes,she has round face and has a samall mouth--she is very beautiful.
my father woke in a factory,but he is a manager,He isn't very cool,but he has two bigeyes and has short hair.He is very takes care of my study .He often say :"Do your homework quickly!"
Look,thsi my family,happy family! By the way,Is your family happy?
my family
I am in a happy family,my parents very love me ,I vr love they too.
M mother works in a factory,she is a worker,she often say :"I like my work." my mother like doing sports ,she often sports in seven AM and in five PM,She has long hair and has big eyes,she has round face and has a samall mouth--she is very beautiful.
my father woke in a factory,but he is a manager,He isn't very cool,but he has two bigeyes and has short hair.He is very takes care of my study .He often say :"Do your homework quickly!"
Look,thsi my family,happy family! By the way,Is your family happy?
very love me - love me very much
very love they - love them very much
often say - often says
like doing sports - likes to exercise
often sports in seven AM and in five PM - often does exercises at seven o'clock in the morning and five o'clock in the evening
and has big eyes - and big eyes
round face - a round face
has a samall mouth - a small mouth
woke in a factory - works in a factory too
and has short hair - and short hair
is very takes care of my study - really cares about my studies
often say - often says
thsi - this is
happy family - a happy family
very love they - love them very much
often say - often says
like doing sports - likes to exercise
often sports in seven AM and in five PM - often does exercises at seven o'clock in the morning and five o'clock in the evening
and has big eyes - and big eyes
round face - a round face
has a samall mouth - a small mouth
woke in a factory - works in a factory too
and has short hair - and short hair
is very takes care of my study - really cares about my studies
often say - often says
thsi - this is
happy family - a happy family