神马作文网MY DAY 我的一天
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I usually get up at eight.Then I wash my face,take a shower and brush my teeth at 8:15.At 8:30 I eat breakfast,I eat eggs,apples for breakfast. Next,I go to school at 9:00.It's very later but It's very early for us.At 9:30 we have classes.They are very hard,but I thank they are very interesting! At 4:30 I go to home,I am very tired.I want to eat dinner.At 4:40 I eat dinner.It's very nice!I do my homework at 5:10.I study hard.At 9:00 I go to bed.It's good!I want to sleep. It is my day,a healthy and happy but busy day.
解题思路： 如下
解题过程：
I usually get up at eight.Then I wash my face,take a shower and brush my teeth at 8:15.At 8:30 I eat breakfast,I eat eggs and apples for breakfast.
Next,I go to school at 9:00.It's very late（very不能与比较级连用）, but it's very early for us.At 9:30 we have classes.They are very hard,but I think they are very interesting!
At 4:30 I go （ to去掉） home,I am very tired.I want to eat dinner.At 4:40 I eat dinner.It's very nice! I do my homework at 5:10.I study hard.At 9:00 I go to bed.It's good! I want to sleep.
It is my day,a healthy and happy but busy day.
文章思路清晰，结构紧凑，行文流畅，衔接自然，用词准确，内容完整且紧扣主题。只是个别词汇运用不准确，今后应注意锤炼句子。
最终答案：略
解题过程：
I usually get up at eight.Then I wash my face,take a shower and brush my teeth at 8:15.At 8:30 I eat breakfast,I eat eggs and apples for breakfast.
Next,I go to school at 9:00.It's very late（very不能与比较级连用）, but it's very early for us.At 9:30 we have classes.They are very hard,but I think they are very interesting!
At 4:30 I go （ to去掉） home,I am very tired.I want to eat dinner.At 4:40 I eat dinner.It's very nice! I do my homework at 5:10.I study hard.At 9:00 I go to bed.It's good! I want to sleep.
It is my day,a healthy and happy but busy day.
文章思路清晰，结构紧凑，行文流畅，衔接自然，用词准确，内容完整且紧扣主题。只是个别词汇运用不准确，今后应注意锤炼句子。
最终答案：略