神马作文网下面的一段话语法有问题吗？应该怎么改？
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下面的一段话语法有问题吗？应该怎么改？
My e-friend
I have an e-friend.She name is Lily.She is 12 years old.She is a pretty girl.She lives in Canada.She can speak English.She has a lot of hobbies.She likes skating.She can skate very well.She likes English and Art.I love her.
My e-friend
I have an e-friend.She name is Lily.She is 12 years old.She is a pretty girl.She lives in Canada.She can speak English.She has a lot of hobbies.She likes skating.She can skate very well.She likes English and Art.I love her.
第二句Her name is Lily. 还有art 不用大写