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解题思路： 见下
解题过程：
同学你好， 你所写的作文明显与要求不符， 而且书写较乱， 看来你的英语基础不是很好。老师希望你要有信心， 书面表达要从基本句型练起。对于这篇文章， 我根据上面提示给你写了一篇简单范文， 都是运用的基本句型， 希望会对你有所帮助。
During the last summer vacation, one day, my parents and I visited Hongkong when it was hot and humid. We stayed there for about five days, during which time we visited Disneyland, where we enjoyed ourselves, and did some shopping.
Though we felt tired after our visit, we felt happy.
如有疑问请留言！老师愿意与你进行进一步的交流！祝学习进步， 周末愉快！
最终答案：略
解题过程：
同学你好， 你所写的作文明显与要求不符， 而且书写较乱， 看来你的英语基础不是很好。老师希望你要有信心， 书面表达要从基本句型练起。对于这篇文章， 我根据上面提示给你写了一篇简单范文， 都是运用的基本句型， 希望会对你有所帮助。
During the last summer vacation, one day, my parents and I visited Hongkong when it was hot and humid. We stayed there for about five days, during which time we visited Disneyland, where we enjoyed ourselves, and did some shopping.
Though we felt tired after our visit, we felt happy.
如有疑问请留言！老师愿意与你进行进一步的交流！祝学习进步， 周末愉快！
最终答案：略