神马作文网谁帮我看一下这篇英语有什么错误?
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谁帮我看一下这篇英语有什么错误?
We will have a gathing party in the center park.But I'm afriad you don't know the way to the center park.So I write this letter to you
When you go out of the school gate,you should turn right.And go along the street until you reach the second crossing There is a hospital on the right side.I'm sure you can't miss it.Then turn right at the second crossing The NO.7 bus' station is nearby.You can take the bus to the center park.you get there,you will see us at the gate of the park.
I wish we will have a wonderful time there!
We will have a gathing party in the center park.But I'm afriad you don't know the way to the center park.So I write this letter to you
When you go out of the school gate,you should turn right.And go along the street until you reach the second crossing There is a hospital on the right side.I'm sure you can't miss it.Then turn right at the second crossing The NO.7 bus' station is nearby.You can take the bus to the center park.you get there,you will see us at the gate of the park.
I wish we will have a wonderful time there!
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We will hold a party in the central park,yet I'm afriad you don't know how to get there.I just write this letter for you.
First,when you go out of the school gate,please turn right,and go along that street until you reach the second crossing ,then you will find a hospital on your right side.I'm sure you can't miss it.Then turn right at the second crossing,you will see the the NO.7 bus station is nearby.Take the NO.7 bus to the stop 'central park'.when you get there,you will find us at the gate of the park.
I wish we will have a wonderful time there!
We will hold a party in the central park,yet I'm afriad you don't know how to get there.I just write this letter for you.
First,when you go out of the school gate,please turn right,and go along that street until you reach the second crossing ,then you will find a hospital on your right side.I'm sure you can't miss it.Then turn right at the second crossing,you will see the the NO.7 bus station is nearby.Take the NO.7 bus to the stop 'central park'.when you get there,you will find us at the gate of the park.
I wish we will have a wonderful time there!