神马作文网高一短文改错,一共10处
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高一短文改错,一共10处
Lu Jun,a teenager from Hebei,has a true friend named Wang Ming.Lu Jun has a serious disease that makes it walking difficult for him.As a young child,Lu Jun would wait for his mother pick him up from school,but one day,she was able to make it.Seen this,Wang Ming offers him a ride home--on his own back.Ever since,he had carried his best friend to and from school,and though helped him get around the school hallways.Nowadays,Lu Jun is a lot heavey than he was,but Wang Ming says that carry him is no problem.Lu Jun feels very luckily to have a friend like him.
Lu Jun,a teenager from Hebei,has a true friend named Wang Ming.Lu Jun has a serious disease that makes it walking difficult for him.As a young child,Lu Jun would wait for his mother pick him up from school,but one day,she was able to make it.Seen this,Wang Ming offers him a ride home--on his own back.Ever since,he had carried his best friend to and from school,and though helped him get around the school hallways.Nowadays,Lu Jun is a lot heavey than he was,but Wang Ming says that carry him is no problem.Lu Jun feels very luckily to have a friend like him.
Lu Jun,a teenager from Hebei,has a true friend named Wang Ming.Lu Jun has a serious disease that makes it （it去掉,或者把后面的walking改成to walk放到him后面）walking difficult for him.As a young child,Lu Jun would wait for his mother （加to）pick him up from school,but one day,she was（加not） able to make it.Seen（改成Seeing） this,Wang Ming offers（offered时态） him a ride home--on his own back.Ever since,he had（has时态） carried his best friend to and from school,and though（though去掉或改成also） helped him get around the school hallways.Nowadays,Lu Jun is a lot heavey （heavier）than he was,but Wang Ming says that carry（carrying） him is no problem.Lu Jun feels very luckily （lucky）to have a friend like him.