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My opinion on copying others'homework
It is known to all that some students copy others’ homework.
Homework plays an important part in our school work, but why does students still copy homework? I asked some students, they said that there were too much homework to finish and school homework was so difficult that they couldnt ' work out. So some students copied others’ homework to make teacher happy. Besides, it was an important result that some students were too lazy and they had not interested in homework at all.
In my opioion, copying homework is bad for our school work , we should finish it by ourselves. If we had some difficult questions ,we should ask teacher for help. Never will we copy homework, we must study better. In short , we should hard working and I hope copied homework won’t be founded in our school . 请青青草老师回答 谢谢 给出升华 25分能的多少分
青青草(作文 给分20分)
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My opinion on copying others'homework
It is known to all that some students copy others’ homework. Homework plays an important part in our school work, but why does students still copy homework? I asked some students, they said that there were too much homework to finish and school homework was so difficult that they couldnt ' work out. So some students copied others’ homework to make teacher happy. Besides, it was an important result that some students were too lazy and they had not interested in homework at all. 1、 主语是students,所以用do提问对不对? 2、 把they改为who,形成非限定性定语从句。就多了一个高级句型。因为前面是句子,而且是逗号标点。 3、 work out是及物词组,应该加上it,work it out。 4、 全文都是现在时,这里也应该是,改为copy 5、 老师是可数名词,应该用teachers或者the teacher 6、 这个句子语意不明。好像你想说抄作业的结果。所以,建议这么改:As a result,some students beome too lazy and show no interest in their homework at all。 In my opioion, copying homework is bad for our school work , we should finish it by ourselves. If we had some difficult questions ,we should ask teacher for help. Never will we copy homework, we must study better. In short , we should hard working and I hope copied homework won’t be founded in our school . 1、 if引导真实条件句,从句应该用现在时,所以把had改为have 2、 此句与上句不连贯。建议删掉。 3、 should+do,所以hard working 改为work hard 4、 改为copying做主语。 5、 改为found“发现”,你写的founded是“建立”。
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最终答案:略