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An unforgettable Experience in my Childhod
When I was 9-year-old.We went to my grandmother’s home,because that day was her birthday ,every adults were busy looking .My brothers and I decided to do sth interesting .So my elder brother put forward a good idea,we could climb the tree.We are very happy ,My sister was the first.Then was my brother.At last,it’s my turn to climb the tree.I was very nervous,my sister said to me “Relax,It doesn’t matter,only a tree,brave,remember it” but I still have a little feverous and frightened,I told myself “I can have a try,I am best.” Then I hug the tree,when I got the top of the tree,I thought it wasn’t tall.So I though ,You can try everything .Only you have courage.
An unforgettable Experience in my Childhod
When I was 9-year-old.We went to my grandmother’s home,because that day was her birthday ,every adults were busy looking .My brothers and I decided to do sth interesting .So my elder brother put forward a good idea,we could climb the tree.We are very happy ,My sister was the first.Then was my brother.At last,it’s my turn to climb the tree.I was very nervous,my sister said to me “Relax,It doesn’t matter,only a tree,brave,remember it” but I still have a little feverous and frightened,I told myself “I can have a try,I am best.” Then I hug the tree,when I got the top of the tree,I thought it wasn’t tall.So I though ,You can try everything .Only you have courage.
An unforgettable Experience in my Childhood
When I was 9-year-old.my family and I went to my grandmother's house.That day was her birthday and all the grown ups were busy looking .忙着看什么?So my brothers and I decided to do something interesting .
So he offered us a good idea,we could climb the tree.
We were so excited for this wonderful idea,couldn't wait to try.My sister was the first.Then was my brother.At last,it finally was my turn to climb the tree.
I was very nervous,my sister told me,“relax,It doesn’t matter,it's just a tree,be brave”.
Easier said than done,i was a little scard,I told myself “I can give it a try,i can do this,because i am the best.”
Then I climbed the tree,when I got the top of it,I didn't think it was so tall after all.So I though ,you can try everything,when you have the courage,you will succeed..
When I was 9-year-old.my family and I went to my grandmother's house.That day was her birthday and all the grown ups were busy looking .忙着看什么?So my brothers and I decided to do something interesting .
So he offered us a good idea,we could climb the tree.
We were so excited for this wonderful idea,couldn't wait to try.My sister was the first.Then was my brother.At last,it finally was my turn to climb the tree.
I was very nervous,my sister told me,“relax,It doesn’t matter,it's just a tree,be brave”.
Easier said than done,i was a little scard,I told myself “I can give it a try,i can do this,because i am the best.”
Then I climbed the tree,when I got the top of it,I didn't think it was so tall after all.So I though ,you can try everything,when you have the courage,you will succeed..