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In the past my hometown was used to be a beautiful place.Thi

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In the past my hometown was used to be a beautiful place.Thick trees and green grass could be seen in everywhere.In order to build house and grown more crops,people cut down more and more trees.With time went on,the whole forest was almost destroyed.Gradually the green hills have changed into wasteland.As a result ,sandstorms struck us now and then ,form which we suffer a lot.however ,I do hope all the people should realize the terribly result of not caring about our environment.What's more the should take care of the forests and plant trees instead cutting them down to improve our living conditions.
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In the past my hometown was used to be a beautiful place.Thi
In the past my hometown was used to be a beautiful place.不知道你们标点符号算不算.past后面最好加逗号.*hometown的后面,was和used to be要删去一个,不能并存.Thick trees and green grass could be seen in eve...