这段话我用英语说的对吗?
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这段话我用英语说的对吗?
汉:有时候有些人你认为很重要,但你不联系他们,他们也永远不会联系你.
Sometimes you think someone is important for you,but if you do not contact them,they also always won't contact you.
请指正.
汉:有时候有些人你认为很重要,但你不联系他们,他们也永远不会联系你.
Sometimes you think someone is important for you,but if you do not contact them,they also always won't contact you.
请指正.
汉:有时候有些人你认为很重要,但你不联系他们,他们也永远不会联系你.
Sometimes you think someone is important (to) you,but if you do not contact (him or her),(he or she) will (never) contact you.
代词someone是单数,只能用he or she表示,不过这样略显多余,建议把someone改成some people,这样就可以用复数代词they了;另外contact作为动词主要是指以书信、电话联系,这里用名词片语lose contact或stay out of contact会比较好.
可以改成这样:
Sometimes you think some people mean a lot to you,but once you lose contact,they (口语通常会在此处加个just,不过书面英语中just只能和过去式连用) disappear.
Sometimes you think someone is important (to) you,but if you do not contact (him or her),(he or she) will (never) contact you.
代词someone是单数,只能用he or she表示,不过这样略显多余,建议把someone改成some people,这样就可以用复数代词they了;另外contact作为动词主要是指以书信、电话联系,这里用名词片语lose contact或stay out of contact会比较好.
可以改成这样:
Sometimes you think some people mean a lot to you,but once you lose contact,they (口语通常会在此处加个just,不过书面英语中just只能和过去式连用) disappear.