神马作文网英语面试稿修改!限两天!
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英语面试稿修改!限两天!
Hello,everyone!My name is XXX.I’m from Wenzhou Experimental Primary School.My hobby is painting,doing sport and using computer.I am good at it.I love English,Chinese and math,because they can make me smart.I won many prize,such as digital magazine making prize,English talking prize……I am very proud.Thank you for your listen.
Hello,everyone!My name is XXX.I’m from Wenzhou Experimental Primary School.My hobby is painting,doing sport and using computer.I am good at it.I love English,Chinese and math,because they can make me smart.I won many prize,such as digital magazine making prize,English talking prize……I am very proud.Thank you for your listen.
Hello,everyone!My name is XXX.I’m from Wenzhou Experimental Primary School.I'm interested in painting,doing sport,and I am good at using computers.I love English,Chinese and math,because they make me smart.I won many prizes,such as Digital Magazine Making prize,English Talking prize and so on,so I am very proud.Thank you for your listening.
1.using computer 改成using computers
2.i am good at it.改成你擅长什么!不要用it!不明确!
3.because they can make me smart把can去掉!
4.listen 改成listening 做名词!
1.using computer 改成using computers
2.i am good at it.改成你擅长什么!不要用it!不明确!
3.because they can make me smart把can去掉!
4.listen 改成listening 做名词!