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请帮我看一看这段话有没有错误
If they are hated by their difference,I may say that:"Oh I hate you cuz you like eating apples but I don't like it."That said,many people still don't accpet them,they even called them "Dingdong".I hope That one dayeveryone can accept homosexuals.
Someone said that god hates homosexuals.Who told him?Did he chat with god?If a man kills 10 children but he believe in god,he can still go to heaven,then why doesn't god accept two people get married?God would not be so stupid.If I am a gay,I will be proud to tell ya I am.
我要表达的意思：如果他们因为他们的不同而被厌恶,那我可以说：“噢我讨厌死你了,因为你喜欢吃苹果但我不喜欢.”尽管如此,仍然有很多人不接受他们,甚至还称他们为“疯子”.我希望有一天所有人都能接受同性恋者们.
有些人说上帝厌恶同性恋.谁告诉他的?他跟上帝聊过?如果一个男人杀了十个孩子但他信仰上帝,他仍然可以进天堂,那么为什么上帝不接受两个人结婚?上帝不会那么蠢.如果我是个男同性恋,我会很自豪的告诉你们我就是.
If they are hated by their difference,I may say that:"Oh I hate you cuz you like eating apples but I don't like it."That said,many people still don't accpet them,they even called them "Dingdong".I hope That one dayeveryone can accept homosexuals.
Someone said that god hates homosexuals.Who told him?Did he chat with god?If a man kills 10 children but he believe in god,he can still go to heaven,then why doesn't god accept two people get married?God would not be so stupid.If I am a gay,I will be proud to tell ya I am.
我要表达的意思：如果他们因为他们的不同而被厌恶,那我可以说：“噢我讨厌死你了,因为你喜欢吃苹果但我不喜欢.”尽管如此,仍然有很多人不接受他们,甚至还称他们为“疯子”.我希望有一天所有人都能接受同性恋者们.
有些人说上帝厌恶同性恋.谁告诉他的?他跟上帝聊过?如果一个男人杀了十个孩子但他信仰上帝,他仍然可以进天堂,那么为什么上帝不接受两个人结婚?上帝不会那么蠢.如果我是个男同性恋,我会很自豪的告诉你们我就是.
大体错误不多,观点也很新颖.我把你写的原文从头到尾看了一下,除了错误修正,还有不太地道的英语表达方式也做了修改.改进后的段落如下：
If homosexual individuals are hated because of their sexual orientation differs from ours,then accordingly am I entitled to argue:"Oh I hate you because you like eating apples while I don't like apples at all"?That being said,many people still don't accept them and they may even refer to them as "the outrageous ones." I hope that one day everyone can accept homosexuals.
Some people claim that God hates homosexuals.Who told them that?Did they actually ever have a chat with God?If a man had killed 10 children but in the meantime he had always believed in God,and he would still be able to go to heaven,then why wouldn't God accept two people of the same sex getting married?God would never be so unwise.If I am a homosexual human being,I will be proud to tell you:yes,I am gay.
If homosexual individuals are hated because of their sexual orientation differs from ours,then accordingly am I entitled to argue:"Oh I hate you because you like eating apples while I don't like apples at all"?That being said,many people still don't accept them and they may even refer to them as "the outrageous ones." I hope that one day everyone can accept homosexuals.
Some people claim that God hates homosexuals.Who told them that?Did they actually ever have a chat with God?If a man had killed 10 children but in the meantime he had always believed in God,and he would still be able to go to heaven,then why wouldn't God accept two people of the same sex getting married?God would never be so unwise.If I am a homosexual human being,I will be proud to tell you:yes,I am gay.