神马作文网英语(作文评改)
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It is a story happened five years ago .LI Hua ,who lived in the city,came to her uncle in our village .She and I became good friend. One day , I went to her uncle’s to do homework with her. But she wasn’t in. I found beautiful clock on her bed. I became very curiously and took it to have a look. Since I have never seen a clock before, Itouthed it here and there. But suddenly, I found the clock wasn’t working . I felt worrying and wanted to run . But I didn’t . Later that day , I toid LI Hua I had broken her clock ..She smiled ,said her little cousin had dropped it onto the ground t his morning and it had stopped working since then. 改错 急 急 急 急
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解题过程：
It is a story (加WHICH) happened five years ago .LI Hua ,who lived in the city,came to her uncle(UNCLE'S叔叔家) in our village .She and I became good friend(FRIENDS). One day , I went to her uncle’s to do homework with her. But she wasn’t in. I found (加A)beautiful clock on her bed. I became very curiously (CURIOUS形容词作表语) and took it (加UP) to have a look. Since I have never seen a clock before, Itouthed (I TOUCHED) it here and there. But suddenly, I found the clock wasn’t working . I felt worrying(WORRIED) and wanted to run (加AWAY). But I didn’t . Later that day , I toid(TOLD) LI Hua I had broken her clock ..She smiled ,said her little cousin had dropped it onto the ground this morning and it had stopped working since then.
故事叙述清晰, 有部分单词使用的错误.
最终答案：略
解题过程：
It is a story (加WHICH) happened five years ago .LI Hua ,who lived in the city,came to her uncle(UNCLE'S叔叔家) in our village .She and I became good friend(FRIENDS). One day , I went to her uncle’s to do homework with her. But she wasn’t in. I found (加A)beautiful clock on her bed. I became very curiously (CURIOUS形容词作表语) and took it (加UP) to have a look. Since I have never seen a clock before, Itouthed (I TOUCHED) it here and there. But suddenly, I found the clock wasn’t working . I felt worrying(WORRIED) and wanted to run (加AWAY). But I didn’t . Later that day , I toid(TOLD) LI Hua I had broken her clock ..She smiled ,said her little cousin had dropped it onto the ground this morning and it had stopped working since then.
故事叙述清晰, 有部分单词使用的错误.
最终答案：略