英文批改作文塞翁失马的读后感I believe in good and bad luck.As I win mark s

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塞翁失马的读后感
I believe in good and bad luck.As I win mark six,it is appear to be a lottery.But for me it just seems as transient and ephemeral as a fleeting cloud an unimportant matter.Whatever my mum uauslly tell me don’t be silly to belief that unsafe
I think the character are lucky of the story.because their experience were good since to begin with the end.The man lost a fine horse at the time,but he did not disappointed.he appear to be stared through the open windows at the clouds scuttling past the sun.Good luck back,and black luck come.We should have a greatful heart.Take a sample,just like the Financial Tsunami,all of people face to be out of work.Maybe some of them are lost money.Everyone felt fear for Financial Tsunami’s causing social problem.However someone luckly finding a job or start a business in a Slow Economy.So when we meet with poor news,we should not be discouraged.Perhaps,bad thing turn to good thing.
我相信好运与恶运,就像我赢得六合彩(意思是中彩票),这样看起来有点靠运气,但对我而言,这看似过眼烟云的小事。不管什么样我妈妈总是跟我说不要傻傻地相信靠不住的运气
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我觉得故事中主角是幸运的,因为他们从始至终的经历都是好的,当时主角失去一匹好马,但他可没有失望。他看来好像凝视窗外匆匆飘过太阳的浮云。好运去…恶运来。我们应该有平常心,拿一个作比喻,就像金融海潇,许多人面临失业,或者他们失去财富。几乎每个人都怕金融海潇所带来的问题。然而,,有人逆景创业 或 找到工作,故此 每当我们遇到倒霉的事情,我们别气馁,可能恶运转成好运

it is appear to be a lottery明显的病句嘛!because their experience were good since to begin with the end还是病句!but he did not disappointed同上!he appear to be stared through the open windows at the c...