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My holiday
I had a good time on my holiday.Spring Festival is the most important festival in China.At that time you can get a lot of money and eat delicious food.I was very excited for it.Because the weather was cold,we didn’t go to travel.Although we stayed at home for a long time,our life were still happy.We cleaned up the house together.We cooked together.We laughed together.Together We lived,we were happy,we laughed.I like living with my parents.
How is your holiday?
BEIHUANGZHONGXUECHUYIQIBANWENYUBIN
My holiday
I had a good time on my holiday.Spring Festival is the most important festival in China.At that time you can get a lot of money and eat delicious food.I was very excited for it.Because the weather was cold,we didn’t go to travel.Although we stayed at home for a long time,our life were still happy.We cleaned up the house together.We cooked together.We laughed together.Together We lived,we were happy,we laughed.I like living with my parents.
How is your holiday?
BEIHUANGZHONGXUECHUYIQIBANWENYUBIN
I had a good time on my holiday.The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China.At that time,you can get a lot of money and eat delicious food.I was very excited for it.As the weather was cold,we didn’t go to travel.Although we stayed at home for a long time,our life were still happy.We cleaned up the house together.We cooked together.We laughed together.Together We lived,we were happy,we laughed.I like living with my parents.
How is your holiday?
we 要写下,是我们什么 加个we family
How is your holiday?
we 要写下,是我们什么 加个we family