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大家看看这篇英语短文有语病吗?
Dear honey,
I hove something to say to u.You should never be anxious about what we will be like in the future,which we ever can't imagine by now,and what we should do now is how we try our best to make us get tegother forever,since we haven't got a single thing that can be relied on,and you know what we have is only love,so just believe it and do it,and it will succeed!
I know you loved me deeper and deeper,as well as what you are afraid of is that you are allways thingking what we do now may be proved just a fancy which we won't
confont ,and so do (I know what we are afraid of is that you are allways thinking
what we do now may be proved just a fancy which we won't confront,as we loved
both deeper and deeper,)that is like the short massage you gived me this morning
that you really want to live with me,but all become nothing in the front of the long
distance between us in reality.
Although I don't know how to comfort you,we can't stop it.Love is love.It's a real
thing existed in our heart and mind,and can't be moved or ignored.Maybe we knew it's a big challenge between us at the very beginning,but we have kept it on,so there must
be an aim that we are confident of achieving it.We have already begun our long
romantic journey without any equiepment defent hurts that may happen by accident.
Dear honey,
I hove something to say to u.You should never be anxious about what we will be like in the future,which we ever can't imagine by now,and what we should do now is how we try our best to make us get tegother forever,since we haven't got a single thing that can be relied on,and you know what we have is only love,so just believe it and do it,and it will succeed!
I know you loved me deeper and deeper,as well as what you are afraid of is that you are allways thingking what we do now may be proved just a fancy which we won't
confont ,and so do (I know what we are afraid of is that you are allways thinking
what we do now may be proved just a fancy which we won't confront,as we loved
both deeper and deeper,)that is like the short massage you gived me this morning
that you really want to live with me,but all become nothing in the front of the long
distance between us in reality.
Although I don't know how to comfort you,we can't stop it.Love is love.It's a real
thing existed in our heart and mind,and can't be moved or ignored.Maybe we knew it's a big challenge between us at the very beginning,but we have kept it on,so there must
be an aim that we are confident of achieving it.We have already begun our long
romantic journey without any equiepment defent hurts that may happen by accident.
Dear ,
I have some things to talk to you.You should never be anxious about what we will be in the future because we can't imagine it now.what we should （删除should,因为后面已有should,表明“应当” ）do now should be trying our best to get together forever since we haven't got a single thing that can be relied on.you know what we have is only love,so just believe it and do it.it will succeed!
I know you love me deeper and deeper.what you are afraid of is that you are always thinking what we do now may be proved just as a fancy which we won't be
confonted with,so it is the same to me!(前面主语并非是you,且谓语是is ,并非是动词形式,故不能用 so do I)(I know what we are afraid of is that you are allways thinking
what we do now may be proved just a fancy which we won't be confronted,as we loved each both deeper and deeper,括号内部分与前面重复,应当删除.)that likes the short message you sent to me this morning
that you really want to live with me,but all become impossible(注：all become nothing是汉语式英语) as there is the long
distance between us in reality.（注：直接接in the front造成语句杂乱与错误,是汉语式英语的表现.且in the front of the long
distance between us不通,要么说“我们面前有很大距离”,要么说“在我们中间有很大距离” ）
Although I don't know how to comfort you,we can't stop it.Love is love,which is a real
thing existed in our heart and mind,and can't be moved or ignored.Maybe we know (此处并非过去时与虚拟语气,用knew不妥)it's a big challenge （应当删除between us,一是前面we know,便不必重复地说between us；二是不符合地道英语的习惯） at the very beginning,but we have kept it on,so there must
be an aim that we are confident of achieving （删除it,因为此为一定语从句,不能再重复用it）.We have already begun our long
romantic journey without any equiepment defending（原文defent错误） hurts that may happen by accident.
注：对于有些错误,直接在原文改出,未注释.
I have some things to talk to you.You should never be anxious about what we will be in the future because we can't imagine it now.what we should （删除should,因为后面已有should,表明“应当” ）do now should be trying our best to get together forever since we haven't got a single thing that can be relied on.you know what we have is only love,so just believe it and do it.it will succeed!
I know you love me deeper and deeper.what you are afraid of is that you are always thinking what we do now may be proved just as a fancy which we won't be
confonted with,so it is the same to me!(前面主语并非是you,且谓语是is ,并非是动词形式,故不能用 so do I)(I know what we are afraid of is that you are allways thinking
what we do now may be proved just a fancy which we won't be confronted,as we loved each both deeper and deeper,括号内部分与前面重复,应当删除.)that likes the short message you sent to me this morning
that you really want to live with me,but all become impossible(注：all become nothing是汉语式英语) as there is the long
distance between us in reality.（注：直接接in the front造成语句杂乱与错误,是汉语式英语的表现.且in the front of the long
distance between us不通,要么说“我们面前有很大距离”,要么说“在我们中间有很大距离” ）
Although I don't know how to comfort you,we can't stop it.Love is love,which is a real
thing existed in our heart and mind,and can't be moved or ignored.Maybe we know (此处并非过去时与虚拟语气,用knew不妥)it's a big challenge （应当删除between us,一是前面we know,便不必重复地说between us；二是不符合地道英语的习惯） at the very beginning,but we have kept it on,so there must
be an aim that we are confident of achieving （删除it,因为此为一定语从句,不能再重复用it）.We have already begun our long
romantic journey without any equiepment defending（原文defent错误） hurts that may happen by accident.
注：对于有些错误,直接在原文改出,未注释.