神马作文网帮忙做一下，下面的短文改错。（每行一个）
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帮忙做一下，下面的短文改错。（每行一个）
要求：找到9个错的 和1个对的， 并且说明应该改成什么。
例：disappointing改disappoined. 若是没有错的，就不用改了。谢谢~！~！
i went fishing with my father on last Sunday.
We started at daybreak.
Not long we came to a stream with clean water,that we could see fish swimming.
It's a good place for fishing.
After a little minutes' preparation,we sat down and began fishing.
An hour was passed,but I didn't get a single fish.
I felt very disappointing.
I often lifted the fishing rod,because I almost lose my patience.
On the other side of the stream,my father had got lots of fish.
I went up to him and asked for some advices.
In the end,with help I got some fish,too.
How happy I was!
2#总体不错，可能是我没说清楚，你说的第2个错和第3个错是在同一行上，所以只能改一个。
要求：找到9个错的 和1个对的， 并且说明应该改成什么。
例：disappointing改disappoined. 若是没有错的，就不用改了。谢谢~！~！
i went fishing with my father on last Sunday.
We started at daybreak.
Not long we came to a stream with clean water,that we could see fish swimming.
It's a good place for fishing.
After a little minutes' preparation,we sat down and began fishing.
An hour was passed,but I didn't get a single fish.
I felt very disappointing.
I often lifted the fishing rod,because I almost lose my patience.
On the other side of the stream,my father had got lots of fish.
I went up to him and asked for some advices.
In the end,with help I got some fish,too.
How happy I was!
2#总体不错，可能是我没说清楚，你说的第2个错和第3个错是在同一行上，所以只能改一个。
1. i went fishing with my father last Sunday.-去掉on，last Sunday，the day before yesterday之类的词前面不用加介词。
2.Not long we came to a stream with clean water,which we could see fish swimming. -用逗号隔开的定语从句不能用that，只能用which。
3.It was a good place for fishing. -上下文时态保持一致（过去时）。
4.After a few minutes' preparation,we sat down and began fishing.-minute可数用few。
5.An hour passed,but I didn't get a single fish. -pass本身就表示时间流逝，不需要用被动态。
6.I felt very disappointed.-这个你已经知道了。
7.I often lifted the fishing rod,because I almost lost my patience. -上下文时态一致。
8.I went up to him and asked for some advice. -advice不可数名词，不能加s。
9.In the end,with his help I got some fish,too. -根据上下文，应该是在父亲的帮助下钓到了鱼。不加his指代不明。
累死我了，想当年我可是短文改错好手啊！
2.Not long we came to a stream with clean water,which we could see fish swimming. -用逗号隔开的定语从句不能用that，只能用which。
3.It was a good place for fishing. -上下文时态保持一致（过去时）。
4.After a few minutes' preparation,we sat down and began fishing.-minute可数用few。
5.An hour passed,but I didn't get a single fish. -pass本身就表示时间流逝，不需要用被动态。
6.I felt very disappointed.-这个你已经知道了。
7.I often lifted the fishing rod,because I almost lost my patience. -上下文时态一致。
8.I went up to him and asked for some advice. -advice不可数名词，不能加s。
9.In the end,with his help I got some fish,too. -根据上下文，应该是在父亲的帮助下钓到了鱼。不加his指代不明。
累死我了，想当年我可是短文改错好手啊！