这封信哪里有错误?Dear Mr.Fabregas:This is Foggy Lee,from Shanghai Ch

这封信哪里有错误?
Dear Mr.Fabregas:
This is Foggy Lee,from Shanghai China,I'm one of your fans .
Congratulations to the Spanish team won the champion of Euro2008!I have watched all these games ,it's really very exciting!
Have you ever been to China It is a large,beautiful country.If you come to China,you will like here.I remember I saw you on magazine one time saying you might come to China,hope you would really come and you are welcome by all Chinese people!
I knew you in 2006's summer,World Cup,at that time you were only nineteen.My family all liked you Although Spanish were not champion ,the team brought us many exciting games,we enjoyed a lot watching the games.This summer,the Spanish team has brought us the great excitement,the moment of Spanish team won the champion would stay in my heart forever!
The new Season will begin soon ,I hope Arsenal Football Club will do great again in this Season and I wish you good health and happiness.I wish everyone in Arsenal Football Club happiness and good health.
Deseo que juegues al fútbol mejor en el futuro.
Best wish,
Foggy Lee.
toostrong：这句不是定语从句，不加Who
lanPoh：你改正就好
匿名：I'm sure you will like it here.
匿名：It 跟 here 不是都指 China

Dear Mr.Fabregas:
This is Foggy Lee,from Shanghai China,I'm a fan of yours.
Congratulations to the Spanish team for winning the champion of EuroCup2008!I have watched all of the games ,they were really exciting!
Have you ever been to China?It is a large and beautiful country.If you ever come to China,I'm sure you will like it here.I remember that once I read about you in a magazine and it said that you might come to China,I hope you would really come and you will be welcomed by all Chinese people!
I first saw you in the World Cup of Summer 2006,at that time you were only nineteen.My family liked you!Although Spanish was not the champion ,the team brought us many exciting games,we enjoyed watching them a lot.This summer,the Spanish team has brought us the great excitement,the moment of Spanish team winning the championship would stay in my heart forever!
The new Season will begin soon ,I hope Arsenal Football Club will do great again in this Season and I wish you a good health and happiness.I wish everyone in Arsenal Football Club happiness and good luck.
Deseo que juegues al fútbol mejor en el futuro.!
Best wishes,
Foggy Lee.
写的很好 基本没有错误
把几个小错误改正了
最后一句看不懂 哈哈 西班牙语啊.
*补充*这句话没有问题 可能稍微有点口语化
不能直接说You will like here的 太直译了
直接说You will like it也行
会知道是指中国的
.这个我也不知道怎么解释 但是用法是正确的
你要是觉得别扭 就直接用You will like it吧