神马作文网发言稿类型的书面表达
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联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察，假定你是接待人员，请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况： 1.大小：近100户人家，约500户人口 2.变化：过去很穷，1978年后变化很大。人们的生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。 3.教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有四层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。 注意：要点齐全，前后连贯。词数100-120之间。 Ladies and gentleman, Welcome to our village.I'll tell you the situation of the village. The number of families has increased by approach 100 and the polution has about 500.Although there was a time when everyone wos poor,great changes have been happened in our villige since 1978.Now,our life is better than once and the villige is changed more and more beautiful.As for education,a new teaching build has being built and it is the best beautiful building with four storeys.All the school-age children can study here.What's more,they enjoy free education. Thank you. 请老师指出不足，如果满分是30分能得多少？是哪些地方失的分？
解题思路： 全文所有要求写的内容都包含，没有遗漏。能分段论述；句型结构算不错，如，there was a time when; 此外，有过渡词as for...what's more等。 美中不足：基本错误较多，所谓基本错误就是时态语态，单词拼写，词性使用得当。这是失分严重的原因。 30分打20分左右。望多写多练，争取更大进步
解题过程：
I'll tell you不够礼貌谦和，可改为：I'd like to tell you或It's my honor to tell you...
段二：approach改为almost ，形容词;
"人口“的单词拼错了； was poor,wos不对，（可能是你电脑打字误打的）
great changes have taken place，指变化的发生不能用happen；
once改为before，once不作名词 ;
the village拼错，the village has become more and more beautiful.change不需被动，用become更贴切；
a new teaching building，building建筑物；has been built，不是has being built;如果是正在被建就是 is being built;
the most beautiful不是the best beautiful；
解题过程：
I'll tell you不够礼貌谦和，可改为：I'd like to tell you或It's my honor to tell you...
段二：approach改为almost ，形容词;
"人口“的单词拼错了； was poor,wos不对，（可能是你电脑打字误打的）
great changes have taken place，指变化的发生不能用happen；
once改为before，once不作名词 ;
the village拼错，the village has become more and more beautiful.change不需被动，用become更贴切；
a new teaching building，building建筑物；has been built，不是has being built;如果是正在被建就是 is being built;
the most beautiful不是the best beautiful；