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英语文章,高手帮忙看看有没有错误,很重要,加分
求求了,万分感谢,只要看看有没有错就好,有的话指出来,告诉我正确的,谢谢了.
In the winter holiday, I am very happy, because I play some fireworks.
In the Lunar December 30, I go to buy some firework with my father.
At the beginning, I am very timid. I dare not to do. Then I'm brave. I can do it alone. .
Fireworks are very beautiful. They are red, green and yellow. They like in full bloom chrysanthemums, like the stars, like the petals fell down.
I like them.
求求了,万分感谢,只要看看有没有错就好,有的话指出来,告诉我正确的,谢谢了.
In the winter holiday, I am very happy, because I play some fireworks.
In the Lunar December 30, I go to buy some firework with my father.
At the beginning, I am very timid. I dare not to do. Then I'm brave. I can do it alone. .
Fireworks are very beautiful. They are red, green and yellow. They like in full bloom chrysanthemums, like the stars, like the petals fell down.
I like them.
In the winter holiday, I was very happy, because I learned how to play fireworks. On Lunar December 30, I went to buy some fireworks with my father. At the beginning, I was very timid. I didn't dare to set off. Later I became brave. I could do it by myself. Fireworks were very beautiful. They were red, green and yellow. They looked like full bloomed chrysanthemums at first,like the stars, and then the petals fell down. I like them.