求,短文纠错.下面这篇短文,读过后纠错,改正不改正随意.Dear Meng.First I need clear up
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求,短文纠错.
下面这篇短文,读过后纠错,改正不改正随意.
Dear Meng.
First I need clear up about i like you this thing.Listening,That's only like!Not love,I admit that I had like you,Might as well tell you.I need a girl who can accompany my life-long,So I won't have a aurtship easily.
Second,what i like is your shy,but you changed now,didn't give my feeling before.
Finally ,I'll tell you sense of love,If i'm in love,That girl must be my wife,and never change,It's only a girl in my life,Thanks for your love,If you love my enough,I hope you can wait for me.
yours.
总感觉很多地方不连贯不像是句子.
初中弟弟的作文拿来检查检查.
下面这篇短文,读过后纠错,改正不改正随意.
Dear Meng.
First I need clear up about i like you this thing.Listening,That's only like!Not love,I admit that I had like you,Might as well tell you.I need a girl who can accompany my life-long,So I won't have a aurtship easily.
Second,what i like is your shy,but you changed now,didn't give my feeling before.
Finally ,I'll tell you sense of love,If i'm in love,That girl must be my wife,and never change,It's only a girl in my life,Thanks for your love,If you love my enough,I hope you can wait for me.
yours.
总感觉很多地方不连贯不像是句子.
初中弟弟的作文拿来检查检查.
Dear Meng,
First I need to clear up about that I like you this thing.Listening,That's like ,but love,I admit that I had liked you,Might as well tell you.I need a girl who can accompany my life-long,So I won't have a aurtship easily.
Second,what i like is your are shy,but you changes now,It doesn't give me such feeling before.
Finally ,I'll tell you the sense of love,If i'm fall in love,That girl must be my wife,and never change,It's only one girl in my life,Thanks for your love,If you love my enough,I hope you can wait for me.
yours sincerely,
First I need to clear up about that I like you this thing.Listening,That's like ,but love,I admit that I had liked you,Might as well tell you.I need a girl who can accompany my life-long,So I won't have a aurtship easily.
Second,what i like is your are shy,but you changes now,It doesn't give me such feeling before.
Finally ,I'll tell you the sense of love,If i'm fall in love,That girl must be my wife,and never change,It's only one girl in my life,Thanks for your love,If you love my enough,I hope you can wait for me.
yours sincerely,
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