神马作文网自己写的英语文章～请指教哈～
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自己写的英语文章～请指教哈～
唉.在下水平是很那个啥.大家实在看不下去的话随便说几句都行～不用看完
dear pat:
you know i joined in a band with my friend alex .we were all crazy about music.
yesterday we took part in a band competition i was the vacal and alex was the drummer .at the beginning,we played well.all of us had been trying our best .we were not anxious to get the prise but just for joy
suddenly ,alex's drum-strick was broken,we were forced to stop.everybody knew that there were no a band can play completely without a drum.we couldn't come up with an idear about how to make the show go on .i got very sad.at that moment,alex stood up and came towards me ."don't give up'he said .i was deeply moved .the show was begun again.we sang together with the audiences' applause
in the end ,we didn't get the prise but i would never forget
that day .
it's very valuable,do you tjink so?i have to stop here.please give my best regards to you family
by the way,write to me soon if you have time
love
chris
唉.在下水平是很那个啥.大家实在看不下去的话随便说几句都行～不用看完
dear pat:
you know i joined in a band with my friend alex .we were all crazy about music.
yesterday we took part in a band competition i was the vacal and alex was the drummer .at the beginning,we played well.all of us had been trying our best .we were not anxious to get the prise but just for joy
suddenly ,alex's drum-strick was broken,we were forced to stop.everybody knew that there were no a band can play completely without a drum.we couldn't come up with an idear about how to make the show go on .i got very sad.at that moment,alex stood up and came towards me ."don't give up'he said .i was deeply moved .the show was begun again.we sang together with the audiences' applause
in the end ,we didn't get the prise but i would never forget
that day .
it's very valuable,do you tjink so?i have to stop here.please give my best regards to you family
by the way,write to me soon if you have time
love
chris
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