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Many people criticize my life and my attitude.I don’t understand why people have that opinion.I agree that I treat my life Laura as a doll.However,I do this because I love her.I want to protect her because she lacks of social experience,and I try to tell her everything she can do because of our social value,which is that men have the domination of the world.
First,I treat my wife like a doll because of the social situation.Right now in our society,men control everything in our society.Women have no right to decide what they do.For that reason,I can let Laura do what I want her to do.If she respect like other women,she should trust me to do what I told her to do.In reality,a woman like Mrs.Linde cannot find a job easily in a men society.Therefore,under the men’s domination,I require my life,Laura,to do things that I want.This is a kind of respect in our family,especially in my family.
The second reason is that Laura lack the society experience.A person like her cannot suit in our society.She is not Mrs.Linde,who is very independent.Mrs.Linde wants to find a job right now.When her husband was dead,she tries to get some property from her husband.However,she gets nothing from her husband.She has enough life experience to face her life.Therefore,she comes to my house,asking a man for a job today.Laura is not like Mrs.Linde.Lack of experience can make her difficult to support her daily life.In addition,we are in the nineteenth century.Women don’t have enough opportunities to do every job they want.Most of time,they have to stay at home and do a lot of housework.These women’s views are limited in the family environment.Also,many women are very under-educated.They lack the abilities to earn wages for their daily lives.In our family,I have a wife,Laura,like those under-educated women.She always considers things as her limited feminist view.She always spends money over-controlled.She talks to others such as a high school student.Under this situation,I cannot let her do wrong things for our family.Therefore,I told her everything that she should do.I admit that I dominate her as a doll.I do that because I want her keep our family well.
背景是 玩偶之家的男主角 角度,不过这不影响作文,感觉很不好这篇,
Many people criticize my life and my attitude.I don’t understand why people have that opinion.I agree that I treat my life Laura as a doll.However,I do this because I love her.I want to protect her because she lacks of social experience,and I try to tell her everything she can do because of our social value,which is that men have the domination of the world.
First,I treat my wife like a doll because of the social situation.Right now in our society,men control everything in our society.Women have no right to decide what they do.For that reason,I can let Laura do what I want her to do.If she respect like other women,she should trust me to do what I told her to do.In reality,a woman like Mrs.Linde cannot find a job easily in a men society.Therefore,under the men’s domination,I require my life,Laura,to do things that I want.This is a kind of respect in our family,especially in my family.
The second reason is that Laura lack the society experience.A person like her cannot suit in our society.She is not Mrs.Linde,who is very independent.Mrs.Linde wants to find a job right now.When her husband was dead,she tries to get some property from her husband.However,she gets nothing from her husband.She has enough life experience to face her life.Therefore,she comes to my house,asking a man for a job today.Laura is not like Mrs.Linde.Lack of experience can make her difficult to support her daily life.In addition,we are in the nineteenth century.Women don’t have enough opportunities to do every job they want.Most of time,they have to stay at home and do a lot of housework.These women’s views are limited in the family environment.Also,many women are very under-educated.They lack the abilities to earn wages for their daily lives.In our family,I have a wife,Laura,like those under-educated women.She always considers things as her limited feminist view.She always spends money over-controlled.She talks to others such as a high school student.Under this situation,I cannot let her do wrong things for our family.Therefore,I told her everything that she should do.I admit that I dominate her as a doll.I do that because I want her keep our family well.
背景是 玩偶之家的男主角 角度,不过这不影响作文,感觉很不好这篇,
原文确实有许多错误,连wife都写成life了!
Many people had criticized my way of life and my attitude.I don’t understand why they have that kind of opinion.I agree that I treat my wife Laura like a doll; this is because I love her.I want to protect her due to her lack of social experiences.As this is a world dominated by men,so I try to tell her what she can and cannot do according to our social values.
The first reason I treat my wife like a doll is the social environment.Right now men control everything in our society and women have no right to decide what they want to do.That is why women like Mrs.Linde cannot find a job easily.If Laura can behave like other women,she should show respect to my family,trust me and do what I told her to do.
The second reason is that Laura lacks the social experiences and it is difficult for her to adapt to our society.She is unlike Mrs.Linde who is very independent and looking for a job right now.She has tried to get some properties of her husband after his death but failed.So she has to face life on her own with her past experiences; that is why she comes to my house asking for a job.
Laura is not like her,she cannot support herself due to the lack of experience.In addition,there are not much job opportunities for women in the nineteenth century.Most of the time women have to stay at home and do a lot of housework; their views are confined within the family only.Moreover,most women are poorly educated,so they are not able to earn money for their livings.My Laura is just like them,always thinks only within her feminist view.She always cannot control her spending and behaves like a teenager.In view of this,I have to tell her what she should do so that she will not make mistakes and hurt our family.For the sake of our family,I admit I dominate her but for a good cause.
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Many people had criticized my way of life and my attitude.I don’t understand why they have that kind of opinion.I agree that I treat my wife Laura like a doll; this is because I love her.I want to protect her due to her lack of social experiences.As this is a world dominated by men,so I try to tell her what she can and cannot do according to our social values.
The first reason I treat my wife like a doll is the social environment.Right now men control everything in our society and women have no right to decide what they want to do.That is why women like Mrs.Linde cannot find a job easily.If Laura can behave like other women,she should show respect to my family,trust me and do what I told her to do.
The second reason is that Laura lacks the social experiences and it is difficult for her to adapt to our society.She is unlike Mrs.Linde who is very independent and looking for a job right now.She has tried to get some properties of her husband after his death but failed.So she has to face life on her own with her past experiences; that is why she comes to my house asking for a job.
Laura is not like her,she cannot support herself due to the lack of experience.In addition,there are not much job opportunities for women in the nineteenth century.Most of the time women have to stay at home and do a lot of housework; their views are confined within the family only.Moreover,most women are poorly educated,so they are not able to earn money for their livings.My Laura is just like them,always thinks only within her feminist view.She always cannot control her spending and behaves like a teenager.In view of this,I have to tell her what she should do so that she will not make mistakes and hurt our family.For the sake of our family,I admit I dominate her but for a good cause.
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