看看这句英语有没有问题?
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看看这句英语有没有问题?
With the rapid development of economy and society,and the increasing of people’s life,the car ownership has risen rapidly.
With the rapid development of economy and society,and the increasing of people’s life,the car ownership has risen rapidly.
不应该用increasing 吧,它又不是名词,而且因为increase本身就有名词词性,所以一般不用它的ing形式作名词.用increase 就好了
还有这里的rise用的也不是很好,用develop 更好些,不过那样就和前面有重复了,真麻烦
还有这里的rise用的也不是很好,用develop 更好些,不过那样就和前面有重复了,真麻烦