以My dream 为题写一篇短文,要求如下

以My dream 为题写一篇短文,要求如下
要求1.短文中要体现自己的愿望,还要体现出你实现目标的方式；2.语句通顺、文章完整；3.多用be going to结构表达句子,但不能太单一；4.词数50~80个 我想当医生.

My Dream
Everyone has a dream.Now I'll talk about my dream I What is my dream?I often ask myself.When I was a little boy,I wanted to be a soldier with a gun so that I could defend our motherland.
Now I am a young boy with a new dream――to be a doctor.I want to be a famous doctor,helping the sick and saving their lives.Why has my dream changed?Well,at the age of 11 I was ill,badly ill.I was told that I had cancer.I had to leave both my school and my friends and go to the hospital.Every day I suf-fered the troubles caused by this illness.
I also saw some people who were suffering and dying of ill-nesses.I made up my mind to become a doctor,so that I can help the sick people and cure them of their diseases.China is a develop-ing country.She needs good medicine and good doctors,especially in the countryside and lonely villages.
I want to try my best to help the poor sick people of our country.I want to let them have an opportunity to receive excel-lent treatments for their illnesses without having to pay much or any money.
I'll do every bit to cure the incurable.I hope to see a world where there is no cancer,no Aids,no fatal diseases.I'm confident that through the joint efforts of you and me,man will put an end to his bodily sufferings and this dream of mine will one day be brought into reality.