神马作文网短文改错 十处 改的不全
来源：学生作业帮 编辑：神马作文网作业帮 分类：英语作业 时间：2024/11/13 03:26:41
短文改错 十处 改的不全
Lu Jun,a teenager from Hebei ,has a ture friend named Wang Ming.Lu Jun has a serious disease that makes it walking difficult for him .As a young child ,Lu Jun would wait for his mother pick him up from school,but one day,she was able to make it.Seen this ,Wang Ming offers him a ride home-on his own back.Ever since,he had carried his best friend to and from school,and though helped him get around the school hallways .Nowadays,Lu Jun is a lot heavy than he was ,but Wang Ming says that carry him is no problem.Lu Jun feels very luckily to have a friend like him.
Lu Jun,a teenager from Hebei ,has a ture friend named Wang Ming.Lu Jun has a serious disease that makes it walking difficult for him .As a young child ,Lu Jun would wait for his mother pick him up from school,but one day,she was able to make it.Seen this ,Wang Ming offers him a ride home-on his own back.Ever since,he had carried his best friend to and from school,and though helped him get around the school hallways .Nowadays,Lu Jun is a lot heavy than he was ,but Wang Ming says that carry him is no problem.Lu Jun feels very luckily to have a friend like him.
Lu Jun,a teenager from Hebei ,has a ture friend named Wang Ming.Lu Jun has a serious disease that makes it （it 去掉）walking difficult for him .As a young child ,Lu Jun would wait for his mother pick （pick 改为picking）him up from school.But one day,she was able(able改为unable) to make it.Seen(改为Having seen) this ,Wang Ming offers(改为offered) him a ride home-on his own back.Ever since,he had(改为has) carried his best friend to and from school,and though(去掉though) helped him get around the school hallways .Nowadays,Lu Jun is a lot heavy(改为heavier) than he was ,but Wang Ming says that carry(改为carring) him is no problem.Lu Jun feels very luckily(改为lucky) to have a friend like him.