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One day,I was in a really bad mood.I decided that drive to t

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One day,I was in a really bad mood.I decided that drive to the shopping centre would clear my head.The car park was busy when I arrived,but I had to park in a far corner.From this spot,I could see two women and a man crossing the road towards a clinic.The clinic was closed but I could now clear see the man's injury.Blood were flowing all over his foot.Get the bandages I have in the glove box,I went over to the group and offered my help.One of the women used the bandages to stop from the blood flow and they made her way back to her car.My own fartunes had suddenly change too—I felt terrlfic.I am greatfully to have been able to show some kindness.那里有错误
One day,I was in a really bad mood.I decided that drive to t
decided that把that换成to.centre后加which.arrived后面的but换成so.clear换成clearly. blood were的were换成was. foot 换feet. Get换成Getting.把stop from的from去掉,flow加ing,把made her way的her换成their,change换成changed,greatfully换成grateful.这样就比较可以了,不过文章读起来怪怪的,不知道出题者是什么水平,要改的通顺就要脱胎换骨了呵呵