英语短文改错我将用积分和一大段话感谢你!有些我会的,有些我不会,哪怕说几点也没关系的,（^-^)另外在打字方面是没问题的

英语短文改错
我将用积分和一大段话感谢你!有些我会的,有些我不会,哪怕说几点也没关系的,（^-^)另外在打字方面是没问题的----因为我已经核对了又核对了!好好努力吧!（^-^)
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1）Yesterday we went to plant trees on the hill near to
2)our school.The boys were made dig pits(坑）.The
3)girls were told to plant the young trees into the pits.
4)All of us worked very hardly.Soon we were all wet
5)With sweat.After the young trees planted,we
6)began to water it.The water was at the foot of
7)the hill.But we stood in line to pass pails(桶)
8)of water from one to other up to the hill.
9)We did not finish water the trees until it
10)was dark.Though we were tired.We feel very happy.
11) The summer hoilday,when I'm looking forward to,
12)is coming.What a fun it is to go fishing!Playing football
13)is one of my hobby.I can ride my bicycle,climb high
14)mountains,or go swimming.Sometime I can play chess
15)with my grandfather.How interested my holiday will be!
16)and my father is always afraid I would be hurt:hurt by
17)a truck,fall into water,fall of a tree or something.He is
18)afraid I would fight with others or kidnapped by bad men.
19)But if I'm careful and polite enough ,how will these
20)things happen?I must try best to persuade my father.

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