神马作文网急！英语演讲稿求改错，顺便觉得可以改长一点建议，在线等
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急！英语演讲稿求改错，顺便觉得可以改长一点建议，在线等
Hello,everyone!Nowadays,books is becoming an important part of our lives.As a book lover,my favorite
Book is Around the world in Eighty
Days.
It tells us an exciting story about an English gentleman Mr.Phileas Fogg,who makes a bet with his friends.He has to travel around the world in eighty days,or he will go broke.
From this book,we can find lots of fun.I am interested in this book because I think it can help me learn some geographic knowledge.I hope everyone can get great fun from this book.
That’s all. Thanks.
Hello,everyone!Nowadays,books is becoming an important part of our lives.As a book lover,my favorite
Book is Around the world in Eighty
Days.
It tells us an exciting story about an English gentleman Mr.Phileas Fogg,who makes a bet with his friends.He has to travel around the world in eighty days,or he will go broke.
From this book,we can find lots of fun.I am interested in this book because I think it can help me learn some geographic knowledge.I hope everyone can get great fun from this book.
That’s all. Thanks.
1. books are becoming a more and more important part of our daily life.
2.he makes a bet with his friends that he has to
3.reading this book gives me lots of fun
可以详细描述一下书里所写过的风景咯
再问： 那演讲稿改长点有什么建议吗？或者开场白结束语什么的
再答： it‘s my honor to be here today to introduce a book i am interested in
最后可以加上 hope you all enjoy reading this book。
再问： 用祈使句不太好人称要统一，主要是we
再答： By reading this book, I understand that when faced with difficulties, we humanbeings should not easily give up, just be strong and brave, but calm to conquer it, I believe we will find a solution!
2.he makes a bet with his friends that he has to
3.reading this book gives me lots of fun
可以详细描述一下书里所写过的风景咯
再问： 那演讲稿改长点有什么建议吗？或者开场白结束语什么的
再答： it‘s my honor to be here today to introduce a book i am interested in
最后可以加上 hope you all enjoy reading this book。
再问： 用祈使句不太好人称要统一，主要是we
再答： By reading this book, I understand that when faced with difficulties, we humanbeings should not easily give up, just be strong and brave, but calm to conquer it, I believe we will find a solution!