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哪儿错了 求改正In modern life,on the one hand,some people appreciat

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哪儿错了 求改正
In modern life,on the one hand,some people appreciate their time by using the high technique,on the other hand,some people prefer to enjoy fast-paced life to get things done.
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哪儿错了 求改正In modern life,on the one hand,some people appreciat
In modern life, on the one hand, some people appreciate their time by using the high technique
与on the other hand, some people prefer to enjoy fast-paced life to get things done.是两个完整的句子
所以这句话之间,需改变标点符号,
用分号,on不用大写 ;
如果用句号, 则on要大写On the other hand