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求英语高手修改英语小作文!
Last summer was enrich .The most happy thing was I met a lovely girl .Her name is YeXiao .Se is easy to get along with .So the soon we’re good friend.She has a short straight hair .She is tall and of medium build.I thought she is differences from other girls .First she is bold ,she likes watching action movie and Horror film.In summer vacation I go to cinema to see Transformers 3.it was exciting And then she’s unique,In my birthday .she got me a big surprise .The gifts is a samll book ,but inside are so many blessing from stranger.
I hope I can be good friend forever with she~And the more.I want to Hangzhou with my family.i visited my firend ,went sightseeing and also went shopping.I leave the first week in June and stay 10 days.Oh ,and I went to Zhejiang University .It was a good vacation .I was very enjoying it!
Last summer was enrich .The most happy thing was I met a lovely girl .Her name is YeXiao .Se is easy to get along with .So the soon we’re good friend.She has a short straight hair .She is tall and of medium build.I thought she is differences from other girls .First she is bold ,she likes watching action movie and Horror film.In summer vacation I go to cinema to see Transformers 3.it was exciting And then she’s unique,In my birthday .she got me a big surprise .The gifts is a samll book ,but inside are so many blessing from stranger.
I hope I can be good friend forever with she~And the more.I want to Hangzhou with my family.i visited my firend ,went sightseeing and also went shopping.I leave the first week in June and stay 10 days.Oh ,and I went to Zhejiang University .It was a good vacation .I was very enjoying it!
Last summer was rich and colorful .The most happy thing was that I met a lovely girl whose name is YeXiao.She has good personalities and is easy to communicate with,so we became good friend in timely fashion.She is tall with short straight hair.I think she is different from other girls.Firstly,she dares to watching action and horror films.In summer vacation I accompanied by her went to cinema to see Transformers 3.And it turned out to be exciting!In my birthday .she gave me a gift full of surprise .The gifts was a samll book ,but inside were so many blessing from stranger.(真心看不懂）上用现在时因为现在她还是那个样子
I hope I can be good friend with she forever.What's more.I want to go to Hangzhou with my family.i visited my firend and went sightseeing and also went shopping.I left the first week in June and stay 10 days.Oh ,and I went to Zhejiang University .It was a good vacation and I enjoyed it.
PS.整篇文章单句太多,不会用连词,单词过于简单.希望再接再厉,多倍句型
I hope I can be good friend with she forever.What's more.I want to go to Hangzhou with my family.i visited my firend and went sightseeing and also went shopping.I left the first week in June and stay 10 days.Oh ,and I went to Zhejiang University .It was a good vacation and I enjoyed it.
PS.整篇文章单句太多,不会用连词,单词过于简单.希望再接再厉,多倍句型