神马作文网呃.英语高手进来帮我下好的加15悬赏
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呃.英语高手进来帮我下好的加15悬赏
The lady with the white fence taught me to leave the gate to life open My husband died in an accident and I bacame very angry.I heled being alone one day when I was driving down a busy street.I suddenly noticed a new fence around a house I pulled off to really watch it.it was such a good street that I was moved I could not send myself away The fence still smelled of fresh paint
"Hello!" I came up and said to a lady in the back garden."I came to see the fence It's so beautiful!"
“oh!The rence is not there forme,”the lady explained to me in a calm voice "I live alone But so many people pass by everyday and I think they may be happy to see something really arltractive some stop like you and come up to chat
"But weren't you sad when they expanded the road and everything changed so much?"
"change is part of life and takes part in talking us who we are when something we do not like happens to us we have two choices-to become a bitter person or to become a better person"
Her answer changed my life I quickly left the gate open and drove on with a new feeling inside me.I could not tell what it was,but I feel the thick stone wall around my angry heart breaking off And apretty white fence was built yet.I decded that I would keep the gate open for everthing and everyone that came my way.
标准点的加30分
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The lady with the white fence taught me to leave the gate to life open My husband died in an accident and I bacame very angry.I heled being alone one day when I was driving down a busy street.I suddenly noticed a new fence around a house I pulled off to really watch it.it was such a good street that I was moved I could not send myself away The fence still smelled of fresh paint
"Hello!" I came up and said to a lady in the back garden."I came to see the fence It's so beautiful!"
“oh!The rence is not there forme,”the lady explained to me in a calm voice "I live alone But so many people pass by everyday and I think they may be happy to see something really arltractive some stop like you and come up to chat
"But weren't you sad when they expanded the road and everything changed so much?"
"change is part of life and takes part in talking us who we are when something we do not like happens to us we have two choices-to become a bitter person or to become a better person"
Her answer changed my life I quickly left the gate open and drove on with a new feeling inside me.I could not tell what it was,but I feel the thick stone wall around my angry heart breaking off And apretty white fence was built yet.I decded that I would keep the gate open for everthing and everyone that came my way.
标准点的加30分
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家中有白色栅栏的那位女士教我打开了通向生活的大门.当我的丈夫死于大脑炎后,我的脾气变得十分暴躁.我讨厌孤独的生活.一天,当我开车行驶在城镇一条繁华的街上时,我突然注意到一个围绕着一座新房子的新栅栏.我停下来认真欣赏这个栅栏.这个栅栏的做工是如此的好,我感动得不想离开这个地方,这个篱笆仍散发着未干的油漆的味道.“喂!”我走上前,和后花园里的一位女士说：“我来看看这个篱笆,它是如此的漂亮.”
“这栅栏并不是为我而建的.”她用平静的声音解释道,“我一个人住在这里,但是很多人每天从旁边经过,我想他们看到有魅力的东西也许会很高兴,一些像你一样的人会停下来和我聊天.”
“但是当他们要扩宽道路时,这里的一切都会改变,你不会感到伤心吗?”我问道.
“变化是生活的一部分,并使我们明白我们是谁.当我们不喜欢的事情发生在我们身上时,我们有两个选择：一是做一个比以前更痛苦的人,另一个是做一个比以前更好的人.”
她的回答改变了我的生活,我小心的离开了打开着的大门,并怀着新的感觉上路,我不知道那是什么感觉,但我能感觉到我心中那堵坚硬的石墙被推倒了,取而代之的是一座漂亮的白色的石墙.我决定敞开心扉迎接一切事情和向我走来的每一个人.
绝对正确.我翻译了半小时呢.
“这栅栏并不是为我而建的.”她用平静的声音解释道,“我一个人住在这里,但是很多人每天从旁边经过,我想他们看到有魅力的东西也许会很高兴,一些像你一样的人会停下来和我聊天.”
“但是当他们要扩宽道路时,这里的一切都会改变,你不会感到伤心吗?”我问道.
“变化是生活的一部分,并使我们明白我们是谁.当我们不喜欢的事情发生在我们身上时,我们有两个选择：一是做一个比以前更痛苦的人,另一个是做一个比以前更好的人.”
她的回答改变了我的生活,我小心的离开了打开着的大门,并怀着新的感觉上路,我不知道那是什么感觉,但我能感觉到我心中那堵坚硬的石墙被推倒了,取而代之的是一座漂亮的白色的石墙.我决定敞开心扉迎接一切事情和向我走来的每一个人.
绝对正确.我翻译了半小时呢.