神马作文网这段英文有没有什么错误?
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这段英文有没有什么错误?
自己翻译的文章,
After dinner ,I opened today’s newspaper ,there were some reports about people did bad things .As a civilized city ,these bad actions make us be sad .
I saw one same thing after oneday’s school.When I passed a vegetable store ,the shopkeeper who was thirty-something years old woman was throwing the remaining vegetables away from the shop.At that time,a passing old woman wanted to pick them up.Looking at this,the shopkeeper hurried to tread at those vegetables.The old woman got a shock:”why did you do that?”
The shopkeeper said rudely :”do I allow you pick them?”
Old woman was very angry almost made her fall.
The crowd around shop were angry too,”these vegetables were thrown away by you,then they have no business with you too.How can you do that?”
“well,you are very kind,why don’t you give any fish to her?” The shopkeeper said to a fisherman.
I was very angry too.I said to shopkeeper:” you are not a civilized person.”
But she said:” children have no matter here.”
I told my grandmother about that picture after arriving home.Grandmother was angry,and she asked me whether the shopkeeper had a red mark on her face.I said yes.Grandmother told me the woman was a bad guy.Grandmother bought some potatoes from her once time,but finding a half of them were bad.
“we will never buy anything from her.” I suggested.
Being a citizen,I want to say :”people,please have more kind,polite,honesty and less rude.
自己翻译的文章,
After dinner ,I opened today’s newspaper ,there were some reports about people did bad things .As a civilized city ,these bad actions make us be sad .
I saw one same thing after oneday’s school.When I passed a vegetable store ,the shopkeeper who was thirty-something years old woman was throwing the remaining vegetables away from the shop.At that time,a passing old woman wanted to pick them up.Looking at this,the shopkeeper hurried to tread at those vegetables.The old woman got a shock:”why did you do that?”
The shopkeeper said rudely :”do I allow you pick them?”
Old woman was very angry almost made her fall.
The crowd around shop were angry too,”these vegetables were thrown away by you,then they have no business with you too.How can you do that?”
“well,you are very kind,why don’t you give any fish to her?” The shopkeeper said to a fisherman.
I was very angry too.I said to shopkeeper:” you are not a civilized person.”
But she said:” children have no matter here.”
I told my grandmother about that picture after arriving home.Grandmother was angry,and she asked me whether the shopkeeper had a red mark on her face.I said yes.Grandmother told me the woman was a bad guy.Grandmother bought some potatoes from her once time,but finding a half of them were bad.
“we will never buy anything from her.” I suggested.
Being a citizen,I want to say :”people,please have more kind,polite,honesty and less rude.
After dinner,I opened today’s newspaper,and read some reports on some people did bad things!these bad stories made us feel so sad while we are living in the civilized social !
While I came back from our school today,on the way
I passed a vegetable store ,and seeing a women in her thirties was throwing the remained vegetables out from her shop.At that time,there was an old woman passing and she wanted to pick them up.While the shopkeeper found this out,she hurried out and treaded on those vegetables which she just threw out from her store.The old woman got a shock and screamed:"why are you doing this?"
The shopkeeper said rudely:"Do I allow you to pick them up?"
The old woman was so angry and almost got herself a fall!
The crowed around store was angry as well:" These vegetables were thrown,and that mean it is nothing to you anymore!How are you still doing that?”
“Well,you are so kind,why don’t you offer some fish to her?” The shopkeeper said to the fisherman...
I was very angry,too.I said to shopkeeper:"You are not a civilized person.”
And she answered:” There is no any business for child here !”
I told my grandmother about the whole story while I backed home.My grandmother was angry and she asked me whether the shopkeeper had a red mark on the face.I said:" Yes!" Grandmother told me that the woman was a bad person.Once,my grandmother bought some potatoes from her and found out half of them were rotten later.I suggested:" Then,we will not buy any thing from her any more !"
Being a civilized citizen,I want to say :"We shall be more kind,polite,honesty and less rude,Please !"
希望我们都能学到一些知识!
While I came back from our school today,on the way
I passed a vegetable store ,and seeing a women in her thirties was throwing the remained vegetables out from her shop.At that time,there was an old woman passing and she wanted to pick them up.While the shopkeeper found this out,she hurried out and treaded on those vegetables which she just threw out from her store.The old woman got a shock and screamed:"why are you doing this?"
The shopkeeper said rudely:"Do I allow you to pick them up?"
The old woman was so angry and almost got herself a fall!
The crowed around store was angry as well:" These vegetables were thrown,and that mean it is nothing to you anymore!How are you still doing that?”
“Well,you are so kind,why don’t you offer some fish to her?” The shopkeeper said to the fisherman...
I was very angry,too.I said to shopkeeper:"You are not a civilized person.”
And she answered:” There is no any business for child here !”
I told my grandmother about the whole story while I backed home.My grandmother was angry and she asked me whether the shopkeeper had a red mark on the face.I said:" Yes!" Grandmother told me that the woman was a bad person.Once,my grandmother bought some potatoes from her and found out half of them were rotten later.I suggested:" Then,we will not buy any thing from her any more !"
Being a civilized citizen,I want to say :"We shall be more kind,polite,honesty and less rude,Please !"
希望我们都能学到一些知识!