英语口语短文,自己写了一点抄了一些,帮我改错!

英语口语短文,自己写了一点抄了一些,帮我改错!
单复数,动名词,词性,语法错误,语意不当等.可删减到150字左右.现为200.
Keep sexy
Today I want to talk about sexiness.What is sexy do you think?About this question,different people have different opinions.Some people may say that sexy is as sexy does.But on my opinion,sexiness is a kind of temperament,life attitude and spirit.
Many people think that sexiness equals perfect looks,Fashionable dress or open manner.But these Often sexiness is worn unknowingly by the truly sexy.The truly sexy may be their confident walk.It may be a look they give you..It may be the way they smile.It may be a look they give you.It may be a sexy mind.I have often found the unassuming prove to be truly sexy which catches you unawares and goes beyond the superficial.
Some Female stars are famous as the worlds sexiest women,such as Angelina Jolie and Jessica Alba.Certainly,they have pretty appearances but I think their sexiness comes from their unique characters.There is Someone who also has Beautiful face but we don’t think she’s sexy.on the contrary,someone’s appearance are ordinary but her temperament is sexy.
In a word,sexiness didn’t equals beauty and it’s a special life style.My slogan is Life is a span,so let’s keep sexy.

好了,基本完成了.首先说一下,我不是很好理解你这用sexy在表达什么.括号里是比较本地的表达方式.语法全部查完了,但是我真的完全不能理解你下办文再阐述什么.可能的话把中文给我我能教你怎么表达.你是不是想表达appealing呢?有时候从句都是很不必要的,没有太复杂的限制修饰时我自己会避免用从句.
Keep sexy
Today (I want to/wanna) talk about (sexiness/sex appeal).What is sexy (do you think/to you)?(About this question/On this issue),different people (may) have different answers.Some (people/of them) may say that sexy is as sexy does.But (on my opinion/to me),sexiness is (a/some) kind of (life attitude and spirit /temperament/profile/style).
Many people think that sexiness (equals perfect looks/is good appearance),(Fashionable/fashion) (dress/dressing) or (open manner/being wild).But these Often sexiness is worn unknowingly by the truly sexy.The (truly/real) sexy may be their confident walk.It may be a look they give you.It may be (the way/how) they smile.It may be a look they give you.It may be a sexy mind.(I have often found/I can always find) the unassuming prove to be truly sexy which catches you unawares and goes beyond the superficial.
Some (female/women) (fashion) stars are famous (as/for) the world’s (sexiest/hottest) women,(such as/like) Angelina Jolie and Jessica Alba.(Certainly/Truly),they have (pretty/perfect) appearances.But I think their (sexiness/appealingness) comes from their unique characters.(There is someone who/some woman) also has (a) beautiful face but we don’t (think she’s sexy/consider she is the sexy one).On the contrary,(someone/one)’s appearance are ordinary but her (temperament?/style) is sexy.
In a word,sexiness didn’t equals beauty.It’s a special life style.My slogan is Life is a span.So let’s keep sexy.