神马作文网麻烦帮我修改一下这封英文信,不难的
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麻烦帮我修改一下这封英文信,不难的
Dear Jennifer,
Thank you very much for the wonderful present you gave me for my birthday last Saturday.It was nice of you to come and see me,and I was so surprised that you had bought me a present.When I opened it I saw it was just the kind of thing I had always wanted.I like the colors and the shape of the frame.I will hang it in my bedroom,It was so nice of you.
I am in senior middle school now,at this moment I am very busy with my studies.I work hard here.My results are getting better and better.
How about you?Have you finished the book report for Mr Gao?You told me last week you had started piano lessons.I would like to come over some time and hear you play.
Well,I don’t want to make it too long today.I have to run to the post office and get this letter posted.
Thanks again for the present and hope to see you soon.
Love,
Kathy Huang
如果有语法错误,请帮我修改一下.主要看这几句话对吗?
1.My results are getting better and better.
2.Have you finished the book report for Mr Gao?
3.I would like to come over some time and hear you play.
或许帮我另编一段询问对方近况的内容,
Dear Jennifer,
Thank you very much for the wonderful present you gave me for my birthday last Saturday.It was nice of you to come and see me,and I was so surprised that you had bought me a present.When I opened it I saw it was just the kind of thing I had always wanted.I like the colors and the shape of the frame.I will hang it in my bedroom,It was so nice of you.
I am in senior middle school now,at this moment I am very busy with my studies.I work hard here.My results are getting better and better.
How about you?Have you finished the book report for Mr Gao?You told me last week you had started piano lessons.I would like to come over some time and hear you play.
Well,I don’t want to make it too long today.I have to run to the post office and get this letter posted.
Thanks again for the present and hope to see you soon.
Love,
Kathy Huang
如果有语法错误,请帮我修改一下.主要看这几句话对吗?
1.My results are getting better and better.
2.Have you finished the book report for Mr Gao?
3.I would like to come over some time and hear you play.
或许帮我另编一段询问对方近况的内容,
第2句有问题．如果你想表达：你来看我是多好的一件事．
It was very nice that you came here to saw me .
It was very nice that you came here to saw me .