神马作文网能帮我再修改一下吗（我是上次让你修改英语文章的那个）
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能帮我再修改一下吗（我是上次让你修改英语文章的那个）
这是原文,帮我改简单一点,顺便加一点内容,控制在一分十五秒左右
An unforgettable thing
It happened in the morning one month ago,and I have not forgotten it since then.
That morning,I slept too late,and I hate being late because it would make me unhappy.So I had a quick breakfast.And at the time,my grandmother was keeping talking to me.She was trying to comfort me and asked me to take care.And she repeated the words for a million times which really irretated me and I yelled at her,"You re annoying!you really are a pain!" At my word,she said nothing.
I would never forget that thing,and it reminds me how my grandmother loves me!This thing made me feel guity for my careless words which might have hurt my dear grandma and I promise I would never let it happen again.
帮我加一点内容：姥姥中无疑就对我很热情，是我很感动，上午是我太冲动了等等
这是原文,帮我改简单一点,顺便加一点内容,控制在一分十五秒左右
An unforgettable thing
It happened in the morning one month ago,and I have not forgotten it since then.
That morning,I slept too late,and I hate being late because it would make me unhappy.So I had a quick breakfast.And at the time,my grandmother was keeping talking to me.She was trying to comfort me and asked me to take care.And she repeated the words for a million times which really irretated me and I yelled at her,"You re annoying!you really are a pain!" At my word,she said nothing.
I would never forget that thing,and it reminds me how my grandmother loves me!This thing made me feel guity for my careless words which might have hurt my dear grandma and I promise I would never let it happen again.
帮我加一点内容：姥姥中无疑就对我很热情，是我很感动，上午是我太冲动了等等
初二可能还没有学到定语从句吧,我把里面的定语从句改一改吧,再加两句表示心情的话.
It happened in the morning one month ago,and I have not forgotten it since then.
That morning,I slept too late,and I hate being late because it would make me unhappy.So I had a quick breakfast.And at the time,my grandmother was keeping talking to me.She was trying to comfort me and asked me to take care.And she repeated the words for a million times and I got very angry.I yelled at her,"You re annoying!you really are a pain!" At my word,she said nothing.Although grandma said nothing about what happened in that morning,I felt something different deep in her heart.She might have get hurt by my words.In fact,I was deeply touched and grateful for my grandma's love to me.
I would never forget that thing,and it reminds me how my grandmother loves me!This thing made me feel guity for my careless words.
It was my fault to let her down and I will bear the thing in my heart so that I will not let it happen again.
It happened in the morning one month ago,and I have not forgotten it since then.
That morning,I slept too late,and I hate being late because it would make me unhappy.So I had a quick breakfast.And at the time,my grandmother was keeping talking to me.She was trying to comfort me and asked me to take care.And she repeated the words for a million times and I got very angry.I yelled at her,"You re annoying!you really are a pain!" At my word,she said nothing.Although grandma said nothing about what happened in that morning,I felt something different deep in her heart.She might have get hurt by my words.In fact,I was deeply touched and grateful for my grandma's love to me.
I would never forget that thing,and it reminds me how my grandmother loves me!This thing made me feel guity for my careless words.
It was my fault to let her down and I will bear the thing in my heart so that I will not let it happen again.