神马作文网可以帮我改一下英语作文吗？
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可以帮我改一下英语作文吗？
as we know the fiu spread easily among people,we should do our best to fight it.every moring,we should do some exercise to keep healthy,we must often open the windows to keep the air fresh,you had batter do not go to crowded places I often clean my room and change my clothes often.we should drink more biled water and eat healthy food.and you must not stay up rest is necessary,because too much work will make us tired.
as we know the fiu spread easily among people,we should do our best to fight it.every moring,we should do some exercise to keep healthy,we must often open the windows to keep the air fresh,you had batter do not go to crowded places I often clean my room and change my clothes often.we should drink more biled water and eat healthy food.and you must not stay up rest is necessary,because too much work will make us tired.
人称的问题最大。之前用的主语是we，而后‘we must often open the windows to keep the air fresh,you had batter do not go to crowded places I often clean my room and change my clothes often.’出现三个人称指代。按照中文翻译是没错的，不过还是应该统一到we的人称上。语句都可以用we should better do sth... and you must not stay up rest is necessary.这句子中间应该断开。 you must not stay up, for having enough rest is necessary. 其他基本还OK。简单句比较多，建议可以考虑来点复杂句式