神马作文网在线求指导：阅读下面的短文,然
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在线求指导：阅读下面的短文,然
| 阅读下面的短文, 然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文. News report:Four young female college students died on Friday after falling or jumping from a blazing room on the sixth floor of Shanghai Business School.Witness said one woman who jumped appeared to be aiming for bushes on the ground,but missed and landed on concrete.Witnesses said the other three were desperately trying to climb to another room amid roaring flames when they fell to the concrete paving. The fire broke out in Room 602 of the sevenfloor dormitory at the school's downtown campus on Zhongshan Road West,just after 6 am.The fire was caused by an electrical device used to heat water. This had ignited flammable objects,police said late Friday afternoon.After receiving reports of the fire at 6:12 am,police,firefighters and ambulances were quickly on the scene.The fire was extinguished by 6:30 am,according to the school. There is only one public toilet on each floor to get water and fire extinguishers in the dormitory were outdated,students said. | [写作内容] 1.以约30个词概括这篇报道的主要内容； 2.以约120个词针对此篇报道发表你对校园安全问题的看法, 至少包括以下内容要点： (1)作为学生, 我们该如何在危急的状况下保护好自己； (2)作为校方应该采取哪些措施避免此类悲剧的发生. | [写作要求] 1.作文中可使用实例来支持你的观点, 也可以参照阅读材料的内容, 但不得直接引用原文中的句子； 2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称. | [评分标准] 概括准确, 语言规范, 内容合适, 篇章连贯. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ |
After the tears, let's focus on dorm safety
It was reported that a tragedy occurred in a girl's dormitory of the Shanghai Business School. Four
girls jumped from their sixthfloor balcony in an attempt to escape a fire, and lost their lives.
People expressed their sympathy after hearing the tragedy. In my opinion, this incident reflects a lack
of awareness of safety procedures. Both the college and the students are responsible for it. On one hand, we students should learn to deal with an emergency calmly in daily life. If there is a crisis, we are
supposed to remain calm, ensure we are safe and then call for help. On the other hand, it is the school
authorities' obligation to take safety measures. Furthermore, more lectures should be held on safety to
enhance students' awareness of the issue.
In short, to avoid similar tragedies, both sides must work together.
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It was reported that a tragedy occurred in a girl's dormitory of the Shanghai Business School. Four
girls jumped from their sixthfloor balcony in an attempt to escape a fire, and lost their lives.
People expressed their sympathy after hearing the tragedy. In my opinion, this incident reflects a lack
of awareness of safety procedures. Both the college and the students are responsible for it. On one hand, we students should learn to deal with an emergency calmly in daily life. If there is a crisis, we are
supposed to remain calm, ensure we are safe and then call for help. On the other hand, it is the school
authorities' obligation to take safety measures. Furthermore, more lectures should be held on safety to
enhance students' awareness of the issue.
In short, to avoid similar tragedies, both sides must work together.
答案不唯一