神马作文网这段英语语法有问题吗?我看着有点怪
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这段英语语法有问题吗?我看着有点怪
我打“[ ]”符号处是我觉得可能有问题的地方.
托尼大学毕业后决定自己开业.一开始好多家银行都拒绝了他的贷款要求.但是他毫不泄气,继续一个个拜访银行家寻求帮助.有一位银行家被他的决心和乐观精神所打动,最终答应贷款给他.如今他成为一位富商.在谈到所取得的另人惊奇的成就时,托尼强调了创业机遇而不是等待机会的重要性.After graduating from college,Tony decided to start his own business.At the beginning,[many a bank] turned down his request for a loan.But he was[ not a bit discouraged],and continued to call on one banker after another [要不要加for?]seeking help.Impressed by his determination and optimism,one banker finally agreed to loan him the money.Now he has become a wealthy businessman.[要不要加when]Talking about his amazing achievement,Tony says that it is important to create rather than wait for opportunities.
我打“[ ]”符号处是我觉得可能有问题的地方.
托尼大学毕业后决定自己开业.一开始好多家银行都拒绝了他的贷款要求.但是他毫不泄气,继续一个个拜访银行家寻求帮助.有一位银行家被他的决心和乐观精神所打动,最终答应贷款给他.如今他成为一位富商.在谈到所取得的另人惊奇的成就时,托尼强调了创业机遇而不是等待机会的重要性.After graduating from college,Tony decided to start his own business.At the beginning,[many a bank] turned down his request for a loan.But he was[ not a bit discouraged],and continued to call on one banker after another [要不要加for?]seeking help.Impressed by his determination and optimism,one banker finally agreed to loan him the money.Now he has become a wealthy businessman.[要不要加when]Talking about his amazing achievement,Tony says that it is important to create rather than wait for opportunities.
many a+名词代表许多（这里要接名词单数形式）a bit的否定句即not a bit相当于"not at all"(一点儿都不)
而a bit在肯定句中修饰动词、形容词、副词和比较级,表示"一点儿"的意思.我觉得如果用for的话就直接for help就可以了,seeking可以去掉
个人觉得加不加都可以
而a bit在肯定句中修饰动词、形容词、副词和比较级,表示"一点儿"的意思.我觉得如果用for的话就直接for help就可以了,seeking可以去掉
个人觉得加不加都可以