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英语信件修改,见下.Hi SergeyI have been to lots of places too,such as

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英语信件修改,见下.
Hi Sergey
I have been to lots of places too,such as Beijing,hangzhou ,Tianjin and so on.
Beijing ,also known as Peking ,is the capital of the People's Republic of China and one of the most populous cities in the world,and it's very beautiful .there are many interesting places to visit .For example,you can go to see the Great Wall ,which is a famous archic in the world.and you also can go to see the red leaves in XIangShan Moutain in Autumu.all in all,The city is renowned for its opulent palaces,temples,and huge stone walls and gates.Its art treasures and universities have long made it a centre of culture and art in China.
Hangzhou is a sub-provincial city in China,and the capital of Zhejiang province,As one of the most renowned and prosperous cities in China for much of the last 1,000 years,Hangzhou is also well known for its beautiful natural scenery,with the West Lake (Xī Hú,西湖) as the most noteworthy location.
I have been to Tsinghua University,Forbidden
City,the old summer palace,Beijing National Stadium,the great wall in beijing .and visited xihu in Hangzhou.
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英语信件修改,见下.Hi SergeyI have been to lots of places too,such as
Hi Sergey,
How are you?
I have been to many places,too.I have been Beijing,hangzhou ,Tianjin and so forth.
Beijing is the capital of China and it is one of the most populous cities in the world.It's very beautiful and abundant .There are many sight spots which are worth visiting .For example,the Great Wall ,which is a famous archic in the world.And the red leaves in XIangShan Moutain which is very beautiful in Autumn.All in all,The city is renowned for its opulent palaces,temples,and huge stone walls and gates.Its art treasures and universities have long made it a centre of culture and art in China.
Hangzhou is a sub-provincial city in China.As one of the most renowned and prosperous cities in China for much of the last 1,000 years,Hangzhou is also well known for its beautiful natural scenery,with the West Lake (Xī Hú,西湖) as the most noteworthy location.
I have been to Tsinghua University,Forbidden
City,the old summer palace,Beijing National Stadium,the great wall in beijing .and xihu in Hangzhou.