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帮忙看看这段话有没有错
Reports were received by London Zoo that a wild puma had been spotted fourty-five miles south of London and the reports were similar in nature.A woman in a small village picking blackberries saw it first.The puma moved from place to place and it left behind it a trail of dead deer.Paw prints and puma fur were found as well.
Cat-like noises were heard at night and it was seen up a tree.Experts were now sure that the animal really was a puma.
这是我自己做的三册一课的writting答案 总觉得有毛病请大家指正 帮我看看哪里错?
Reports were received by London Zoo that a wild puma had been spotted fourty-five miles south of London and the reports were similar in nature.A woman in a small village picking blackberries saw it first.The puma moved from place to place and it left behind it a trail of dead deer.Paw prints and puma fur were found as well.
Cat-like noises were heard at night and it was seen up a tree.Experts were now sure that the animal really was a puma.
这是我自己做的三册一课的writting答案 总觉得有毛病请大家指正 帮我看看哪里错?
我不知道你的题目是什么.但是一看你写到puma,45 miles south of London就想起这是新概念的第一课A puma at large!
我是基于和原文的比较,发现一点小小问题：
1）the reports were similar in nature.原文是讲见过美洲豹的人对这头美洲豹的描述都相当类似,而不是说“报道”是类似的.
2）A woman in a small village picking blackberries saw it first.这句话中picking修饰woman,所以直接跟在woman后面.而不是village后面
3）The puma moved from place to place and it left behind it a trail of dead deer.这句话基本是概括原文,无错误.
4）Paw prints and puma fur were found as well.（原文是：Paw prints were seen in a number of places and puma fur was found clinging to bushes）无语法错误.
5）Cat-like noises were heard at night and it was seen up a tree.Experts were now sure that the animal really was a puma.（原文是：Several people complained of "cat-like noises' at night and a businessman on a fishing trip saw the puma up a tree.The experts were now fully convinced that the animal was a puma.）无语法错误.
原文供你参考：
Pumas are large,cat-like animals which are found in America.When reports came into London Zoo that a wild puma had been spotted forty-five miles south of London,they were not taken seriously.However,as the evidence began to accumulate,experts from the Zoo felt obliged to investigate,for the descriptions given by people who claimed to have seen the puma were extraordinarily similar.
The hunt for the puma began in a small village where a woman picking blackberries saw 'a large cat' only five yards away from her.It immediately ran away when she saw it,and experts confirmed that a puma will not attack a human being unless it is cornered.The search proved difficult,for the puma was often observed at one place in the morning and at another place twenty miles away in the evening.Wherever it went,it left behind it a trail of dead deer and small animals like rabbits.Paw prints were seen in a number of places and puma fur was found clinging to bushes.Several people complained of "cat-like noises' at night and a businessman on a fishing trip saw the puma up a tree.The experts were now fully convinced that the animal was a puma,but where had it come from?As no pumas had been reported missing from any zoo in the country,this one must have been in the possession of a private collector and somehow managed to escape.The hunt went on for several weeks,but the puma was not caught.It is disturbing to think that a dangerous wild animal is still at large in the quiet countryside.
我是基于和原文的比较,发现一点小小问题：
1）the reports were similar in nature.原文是讲见过美洲豹的人对这头美洲豹的描述都相当类似,而不是说“报道”是类似的.
2）A woman in a small village picking blackberries saw it first.这句话中picking修饰woman,所以直接跟在woman后面.而不是village后面
3）The puma moved from place to place and it left behind it a trail of dead deer.这句话基本是概括原文,无错误.
4）Paw prints and puma fur were found as well.（原文是：Paw prints were seen in a number of places and puma fur was found clinging to bushes）无语法错误.
5）Cat-like noises were heard at night and it was seen up a tree.Experts were now sure that the animal really was a puma.（原文是：Several people complained of "cat-like noises' at night and a businessman on a fishing trip saw the puma up a tree.The experts were now fully convinced that the animal was a puma.）无语法错误.
原文供你参考：
Pumas are large,cat-like animals which are found in America.When reports came into London Zoo that a wild puma had been spotted forty-five miles south of London,they were not taken seriously.However,as the evidence began to accumulate,experts from the Zoo felt obliged to investigate,for the descriptions given by people who claimed to have seen the puma were extraordinarily similar.
The hunt for the puma began in a small village where a woman picking blackberries saw 'a large cat' only five yards away from her.It immediately ran away when she saw it,and experts confirmed that a puma will not attack a human being unless it is cornered.The search proved difficult,for the puma was often observed at one place in the morning and at another place twenty miles away in the evening.Wherever it went,it left behind it a trail of dead deer and small animals like rabbits.Paw prints were seen in a number of places and puma fur was found clinging to bushes.Several people complained of "cat-like noises' at night and a businessman on a fishing trip saw the puma up a tree.The experts were now fully convinced that the animal was a puma,but where had it come from?As no pumas had been reported missing from any zoo in the country,this one must have been in the possession of a private collector and somehow managed to escape.The hunt went on for several weeks,but the puma was not caught.It is disturbing to think that a dangerous wild animal is still at large in the quiet countryside.