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改错,一共十处In midday,the sun was very strong.jim was very tired

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改错,一共十处
In midday,the sun was very strong.jim was very tired to walk.there were not any trees near the road,so herested by a big stone .after dring some water,he took off his shirt,lied down on the ground and fell asleep at once.he was much tired that he didnt wake up until the evening.he has just about to jump when he felt sometimes move near his feet.he looked up and saw a long black snake.jim was too frightened not to move.thesanke began to crawl crosshis leg.it crawled on and on.untill it disappeared under the rock.jim jumped to his feet,pikup his shirt and ran off down the road.
一共有十处
改错,一共十处In midday,the sun was very strong.jim was very tired
1. Jim was very tired walking.
2. he rested on a big stone.
3. after drinking some water
4/5. He was so tired that he didn't wake up until evening
6. He was just about to jump
7/8. when he felt something moving near his feet.
9. Jim was too frightened to move.
10. The snake began to crawl across his leg.
11/12. Jim jumped on his feet, picked up his shirt
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