请老师评判我的作文,并指出问题,谢谢
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I'm a student from Beijing. Beijing will hold the 2008 Olympic Games. all the people in Beijing and in China are trying their best to get ready at the freat games. Beijing has changed a lot. The city is cleaner and cleaner. The sky is blue and blue The traffic is more and more coveniet. As middle school students. we study hard and speak English as much as possible.
解题思路: 首先要知道英语单词的拼写,再次要注意题目中的要求和时态。
解题过程:
1。Beijing will hold the 2008 Olympic Games. 改为被动语态比较好,即:The 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing.
2. get ready at 改为:get ready for
3. The sky is blue and blue 改为:The sky is bluer and bluer 承接上一句The city is cleaner and cleaner。
这篇文章总的来说还是不错的,但单词数略微少一点。一般中考中,作文是10分,本篇是可以得到7分左右的。
祝寒假快乐!
最终答案:略
解题过程:
1。Beijing will hold the 2008 Olympic Games. 改为被动语态比较好,即:The 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing.
2. get ready at 改为:get ready for
3. The sky is blue and blue 改为:The sky is bluer and bluer 承接上一句The city is cleaner and cleaner。
这篇文章总的来说还是不错的,但单词数略微少一点。一般中考中,作文是10分,本篇是可以得到7分左右的。
祝寒假快乐!
最终答案:略
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