帮我检查一篇文章帮我检查一下,找出错误的地方,加以修改并说明为什么这么改Like May Day,we enjoy a

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Like May Day,we enjoy a seven-day holiday,too.We can travel to many places of interest.And I usually finish my homework two days before the holiday ends.So I can play on the computer.On October 6th and 7tn.In the morning of October 1st,I always think of the long story of our motherland when I see our national flag going up on the TV.So I like National Day very much.

Like May 可能你想说的是“和五一长假一样?但是表达有问题）,we enjoy a seven-day holiday,too.We can travel to many places of interest.And I usually finish my homework two days before the holiday ends.So I can play on the computer.On October 6th and 7tn（前面两句都是独立的句子,一个以and开头,一个以so开始.不符合书面语的规范）.In（某个具体的早上用on）the morning of October 1st,I always think of the long story of our motherland（这句话意思含糊.你想表达的是“总是想到我们祖国悠久的历史吗”?） when I see our national flag going up（go up欠妥） on the TV(不要the,因为不是指具体的某一台电视机）.So I like National Day very much.（so用的也不好.直接一句简单的表白更好）.
Like May 1sth holiday,National Holiday also has seven day.We can travel to many places of interest and do many other things that we like(加上这句是因为除了旅游人们还有很多其他的事情可做,比如你后面提到的早点做完作业然后上网）.I usually finish my homework two days before the holiday ends so that I can play on the computer on 6th and 7th of October.On the early morning of October 1st,I always think of the long history of our motherland when I see our national flag rise up on TV.I love National Day.

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