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英语语法问题As far as I am concerned,career achievement and moneta

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英语语法问题
As far as I am concerned,career achievement and monetary return were important,but were it left to me to decide whether we shall choose career achievement or monetary return,I shall not hesitate a moment to prefer the latter.[教师点评] [低频警示] choose...achievement 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语  好评报错[句子错误] 本句语法不规范,请检查! 好评报错
[名词错误] 冠词缺失,choose career不规范,建议修改. 好评报错
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英语语法问题As far as I am concerned,career achievement and moneta
好久不看语法,随便说说,你就当意见看吧.1.第一句话为什么用were不是are,说明一个事实没有特别时间说明,应该用are both important吧;2.第二句特别的乱,were it left to me能不能简化成but were I left to decide;3.既然是I decide,怎么能decide we shall do something,应该是decide 自己do something,因此自己可以省略,简化为to decide to choose whether ca or mr;4.虚拟语气的主句没有用shall 的,换成would吧;5.not hesitate a moment to prefer觉得 很奇怪啊,换成prefer the second without any hesitate顺口多了;
结果:AS far as I am concerned,career achievement and monetary return are both important.But were I left to decide to choose whether career achievement or monetary return,I would prefer the second without any hesitate.